雅思IELTS寫作Task 1表格的Band 6、7、8版本

Band 6

The table gives information about the population, the journey to work and the way people travelled in five cities in 2025.

Overall, the cities were different from each other, and in some cities people travelled longer and used public transport more than in the other cities有overview，但沒有說是哪幾個城市，也沒有把通勤時間和出行方式連起來.

City A had a population of 1.2 million and the most long詞形錯誤：應為「longest」 journey to work, at 52 minutes. 48 per cent of commuters used public transport and 4 per cent used a bicycle為一個城市讀出兩個欄位，卻沒有和其他城市比較. City D had 2.1 million people, the journey took 45 minutes, 41 per cent used public transport and 6 per cent cycled.

In City B, the population were主詞動詞不一致：應為「was」 3.5 million, which was the biggest, and the journey took 38 minutes. City C and City E were the smallest cities, with 0.8 and 0.6 million people. Their journeys were the shortest, at 24 and 21 minutes, and about 40 per cent of commuters in City C cycled數字是35%，所以「about 40」太寬鬆，已經和表格不符. Also單純的附加詞；句子只是一句接著一句列出, in City E 28 per cent cycled and 9 per cent used public transport. City B had 30 per cent on public transport and 12 per cent on bicycles.

Band 7

The table compares five cities in 2025 by population, the average journey to work and the shares of commuters who travelled by public transport and by bicycle.

Overall, the cities with the longest journeys to work, A and D, had the highest use of public transport and the lowest cycling, while the reverse was true of C and E, the cities with the shortest journeysoverview把城市分組，並把通勤時間和出行方式連起來.

City A had the longest average journey, at 52 minutes, and nearly half of its commuters, 48 per cent, used public transport, while only 4 per cent cycled. City D showed a similar pattern, with a 45-minute journey and 41 per cent travelling by public transport and just 6 per cent by bicycle「with」後面是平行的片語，形式一致.

At the other extreme標示轉到相反的那一組城市，位置恰當, City E had the shortest journey, at 21 minutes, and only 9 per cent of commuters used public transport. City C, which have動詞形式錯誤：應為「had」 the second shortest journey, at 24 minutes, recorded the highest share of cyclists報告表格數字時精確的用語, 35 per cent. Population did not follow the same pattern, as City B, the largest at 3.5 million, had a shorter journey than A or D檢驗了那一欄不符合overview的數據，並直接說出來.

Band 8

The table presents data for five cities in 2025: population, the average journey to work in minutes, and the percentages of commuters who used public transport and bicycles.

Overall, journey length sorted the cities: where journeys were longest, public transport dominated and cycling was marginal, and where they were shortest, the position was reversed點出整理這張表格的那一欄，並且兩個方向的規律都說到.

City A combined the longest journey, at 52 minutes, with the highest public transport share, 48 per cent, and the lowest cycling rate, 4 per cent; City D followed closely on all three measures, at 45 minutes, 41 per cent and 6 per cent一連串相符的數字，在一句話裡回答三項指標.

At the other end of the range開啟第二組，並呼應第一組，所以不需要連接詞, City E had the shortest journey, 21 minutes, and the smallest public transport share, 9 per cent, while City C was only three minutes behind on time yet led for cycling簡潔而精確，證明它的數字就在下一個片語, at 35 per cent. City B sat between the two groups on every measure一個子句概括了整整一列，所以報告不需要再寫數字. Population explains none of this: City B was the largest, at 3.5 million, yet its journey of 38 minutes was well below that of A不符合的那一欄被檢驗後擱置，並附上顯示這一點的數字.