Band 6
I want to talk about my elderly neighbour, Mrs. Aliyeva, who live主詞動詞不一致:應為「lives」 alone a few doors from my family. About two years ago, she break時態錯誤:應為「broke」 her wrist after a fall and suddenly she cannot do basic things like carrying shopping bags or even opening jars, which was obviously a tough spot for someone who lives alone. My mother notice時態錯誤:應為「noticed」 she was struggling one afternoon and asked me if I could step in and help until her wrist got better.
Band 7
I’d like to talk about an elderly neighbour of mine, Mrs. Aliyeva, who lives alone a few doors down自然、精準的用語 from my family. About two years ago, she broke her wrist after a fall and suddenly couldn’t manage basic things like carrying shopping bags or even opening jars, which was obviously a tough spot for someone living by herself自然地使用非限定關係子句. My mother noticed she was struggling one afternoon and asked if I could step in and help out until her wrist healed properly.
Band 8
I’d like to talk about an elderly neighbour of mine, Mrs. Aliyeva, who lives alone just a few doors down from my family. About two years ago, she broke her wrist in a fall and suddenly found herself unable to manage basic things自然的複雜動詞結構 like carrying shopping bags or even opening jars — a genuinely tough spot for someone living on her own精準、道地的慣用語. My mother noticed she was struggling one afternoon and asked whether I could step in until her wrist healed properly.