雅思IELTS寫作Task 1圓餅圖的Band 6、7、8版本

Band 6

The two pie charts show the percentage of household waste in one country that was dealt with in four different ways in 2005 and 2025.

Overall, there were big changes between 2005 and 2025, and landfill went down while the other ways went up有overview，但「big changes」很籠統，也沒有說回收變成了最大的方式.

In 2005, 60 per cent of waste went to landfill, 20 per cent was recycled, 15 per cent was burned and 5 per cent was composted第一張圓餅的四個數字依序全部讀出，沒有做任何比較. Landfill was the biggest method and recycling was the second biggest. In 2025, landfill was fell動詞形式錯誤：應為「fell」 to 20 per cent, which was a half of the figure in 200560到20是三分之一，所以這個比較讀錯了圖表. This is a very big change in twenty years.

Recycling increased until介系詞錯誤：應為「increased to」 45 per cent, so it became the biggest method. Composting grew from 5 to 15 per cent and also連續用了兩個表示附加的詞；這個連接只是在加，沒有把堆肥和其他方式連起來 incineration grew a little, from 15 to 20 per cent. The number of waste比例不是number：應為「the percentage of waste」或「the amount of waste」 that was recycled was higher than the number that went to landfill. Incineration was the same as landfill in 2025, with 20 per cent each. So we can see that the way of dealing with waste changed a lot in the country.

Band 7

The pie charts compare the proportion of household waste in one country that was landfilled, recycled, composted or incinerated in 2005 and in 2025.

Overall, landfill, which was the main method in 2005, was replaced by recycling in 2025, and every other method accounted for a larger share than beforeoverview點出領先者的更替，也點出其他每種方式的方向.

In 2005, landfill accounted for表示整體中一部分的自然說法 60 per cent of waste, three times the share of recycling at 20 per cent. Composting and incineration were minor at that time, with 5 and 15 per cent. By 2025, however時間連接詞帶出兩張圖之間的對比, landfill had fallen to 20 per cent, so that it equalled incineration and was well below recycling結果子句，把三種方式放進同一個句子.

Recycling more than doubled to 45 per cent, which made it the largest method, ahead of landfill and incineration by 25 points. Composting, the smallest method in 2005, rose from 5 to 15 per cent, which are a threefold increase主詞動詞不一致：應為「is a threefold increase」, while incineration grew more modestly, from 15 to 20 per cent. Together, these three methods took 80 per cent of waste in 2025, compared with 40 per cent in 2005合計的數字，顯示出離開掩埋的轉變有多大.

Band 8

The pie charts show how household waste in one country was divided between landfill, recycling, composting and incineration in 2005 and 2025, as percentages of the total, so that in each year the four methods account for all of the waste.

Overall, landfill was the dominant method in 2005 but had been overtaken by recycling by 2025, with every other method gaining ground一句話點出領先者的更替和其餘方式的方向，沒有用數字搶先說出細節.

Landfill took 60 per cent of waste in 2005, three times as much as recycling, and composting and incineration together handled barely a fifth of it, yet by 2025 it had shrunk to a third of that figure精確：20對60是三分之一，而「shrunk」說明這是穩定的減少, level with incineration at 20 per cent.

Recycling made the opposite journey指回掩埋的下降並轉到下一個階段，所以不需要連接詞, more than doubling from 20 to 45 per cent to become the leading method, 25 points clear of both landfill and incineration一個片語裡同時有變化和它對排名的影響, while composting, a marginal 5 per cent in 2005, tripled to 15對比子句中插入了名詞片語，標點使用乾淨. Incineration alone barely moved以對比開頭，所以不需要表示附加的連接詞, rising by five percentage points to 20 per cent, so the main shift was from landfill to recycling and composting, which now handle 60 per cent between them.