Writing的每個分數等級究竟要求什麼

示意範例 題目問博物館是否應該收門票，作文卻寫成對某一座博物館的描述。

Museums are very important for everybody in the society. Last year I visit a museum in my city and it was very interesting for me.

示意範例 兩部分的題目（為什麼會發生這種情況？可以怎麼做？），第二部分卻始終沒有出現。

There are many reasons for this situation. Firstly, people are busy. Secondly, prices are high. In conclusion, this is a big problem for everyone today.

示意範例 立場清楚，但有一個主體段落只點出一個想法，卻從未展開。

I believe the advantages clearly outweigh the drawbacks.

Another benefit is convenience, which is very important for modern families. Moving on to my second point, the cost is also a factor.

示意範例 一個論點被提出、被推進，然後有了具體的東西作支撐。

Charging for entry shifts the cost onto visitors rather than taxpayers. That sounds fair until you notice who stops visiting: school groups and low-income families drop away first, which is precisely the audience a public collection exists to reach.

示意範例 每個段落都為它提出的想法作結，支持內容具體到可以被反駁。

The revenue argument holds only if attendance survives the charge. Where entry fees have been introduced and later dropped, the visiting public that returned was not the same one that left — and rebuilding an audience takes far longer than losing one.

示意範例 作文裡沒有任何東西是用來湊篇幅的：每一段都回答題目的一部分，每個例子之所以被選，是因為它解決了某件事。讀者讀完時，題目沒有任何一部分是懸而未決的。

示意範例 一整塊沒有分段的文字，每個銜接都用同一個連接詞。

And also the pollution is bad. And also people drive a lot. And also the government should do something and also the people.

示意範例 一個段落一再重複自己的主詞，因為從來沒有用更輕巧的說法來取代。

Moreover, the government should build more housing. Moreover, the government has money for this. Moreover, the government must act now because the government is responsible.

示意範例 論證確實有推進，但句子之間的銜接是外加上去的，而不是內建的。

Firstly, city traffic is worse than before. Secondly, this is a serious issue. Thirdly, the government must act on this.

示意範例 單一主題的段落，句子之間自然承接，不必加上標示。

Congestion charging works on the traffic it prices, not on the traffic it moves. Drivers who can pay keep driving; those who cannot shift onto buses that are already full. The measure therefore reduces cars before it improves journeys.

示意範例 兩個互相交接的段落，不需要任何連接詞就能看出交接。

Pricing the road changes who drives, not how many journeys a city needs to make. Those journeys land somewhere else — and in most cities, that somewhere is a bus network built for a smaller crowd.

示意範例 你指不出哪裡是銜接，而這正是重點。讀者從一個想法走到另一個想法，完全沒有意識到帶著他們前進的機制，每一次分段，都出現在思路轉折的那一刻。

示意範例 僅為示意：以下的拼錯是故意的。

Polution is a very big problem and the goverment must make a big action for stop it.

示意範例 一個詞用了錯誤的詞形，加上一個憑發音拼出來的長單字。

This is a benefit society for all people, and the enviroment will be more better in the future.

示意範例 嘗試了一個較不常見的詞，搭配幾乎正確。

The rapid growth of cities has made a significant impact on public transport, and many governments have done research about this problem.

示意範例 精準的選擇做到了一般用字做不到的事，語體也維持穩定。

Congestion is not an inconvenience so much as a tax on time, and it falls hardest on the commuters least able to absorb it.

示意範例 不常見的詞出現在那裡，是因為它是準確的那個，而不是因為它不常見。

The policy does not reduce demand; it reallocates it, and a network already running at capacity absorbs that reallocation badly.

示意範例 文章裡沒有任何一個詞讀起來像是為了被注意而選的。語體、精準度和自然的詞語搭配，從第一句到最後一句都維持住，而在簡單的詞才對的地方，用的就是簡單的詞。

示意範例 僅為示意：以下的標點，是刻意寫成Band 4的作答會有的樣子。

The city is very crowded, the buses is always full, people waiting long time and they is angry.

示意範例 一個站得住腳的簡單句，後面接著一個在中間垮掉的較長句。

Public transport is expensive in my country. Although the government say that they will improving the system, but the price is still increase every year which many people cannot affording it.

示意範例 結構是對的；主詞動詞一致與冠詞的小錯誤，經過校對仍然留了下來。

Although the government has invested in new buses, the number of passenger have not increased, which suggests that price is the real barrier.

示意範例 不同的結構用在不同的任務上，標點讓讀者不必重讀。

Had the network been expanded first, the charge might have worked. As it stands, drivers priced off the road arrive at bus stops that were already crowded before the policy began.

示意範例 長短句刻意交替，標點負責掌握節奏。

What the charge achieves depends entirely on what the money funds. Spent on the network, it buys capacity; spent on general revenue, it buys nothing a commuter can see.

示意範例 讀者不再察覺到文法的存在。句子長度、從屬結構和標點，都是依想法的需要來選，評分者能指出的唯一錯誤，是那種即使細心校對也會漏掉的失誤。

示意範例 圖表涵蓋四個國家，卻被描述成只涵蓋一個，並以個人看法收尾。

This country is the best one in the graph. In my opinion, the government there is doing a very good job with recycling.

示意範例 六個句子，各帶一個數字，卻沒有一行字指出整體的模式。

The graph shows the first country at the start of the period. The graph shows the second country next. After that the graph shows the third country.

示意範例 一段真正的overview，後面接著一個誤讀了圖表的細節句。

Overall, spending rose in every category across the period, with transport growing fastest.

Housing also grew steadily, overtaking transport by the end — which is not what the chart shows.

示意範例 overview表明了方向和幅度，然後主體才把數據分組。

Overall, every category rose over the period, but the increase in transport was far steeper than the rest, and housing barely moved.

示意範例 分組比較，每個被引用的數字，都是能讓它所屬那組比較定案的那一個。

Transport accounted for the sharpest rise of the four, climbing by roughly half again over the period, while housing — the largest category throughout — ended almost exactly where it began.

示意範例 每個句子都在做三件事之一：總結、挑選或支持，沒有一個句子把其中兩件事做得很差。一個從未見過圖表的讀者，事後也能描述它的形狀。

示意範例 寫給房東的投訴信，雙方素未謀面，開頭卻像是寫給同學的訊息。

Hey there! So the heating is broken again, it's really annoying me. Anyway, talk soon.

示意範例 兩段背景說明，真正的請求卻出現在最後一行。

I have lived in this flat for some time and I like the area very much. The neighbours are quiet and the shops are close. Could you send someone to fix the heating.

示意範例 一封達成任務的正式投訴信，其中有一行屬於另一封信。

I am writing to report a recurring fault with the heating in flat 4B, which has now failed three winters running.

Anyway, hope you're keeping well in this weather!

示意範例 第一行就說明目的，語體前後一致，請求也是讀者可以據以行動的。

I am writing to ask that the heating in flat 4B be repaired before the end of the month. The fault has recurred each winter since I moved in, and on each occasion the flat has been without heat for several days.

示意範例 請求、請求的依據，以及忽視請求的後果，用的是從不搖擺的語體。

Since the fault has now been reported three times without a lasting repair, I would ask that the boiler be replaced rather than patched again. If that is not possible before the end of the month, I would be grateful for written confirmation of when it will be.

示意範例 這封信讀起來，像是一個真實的人為了真實的理由寫給真實的讀者，每一段都在推進那個理由。沒有任何東西需要解釋兩次。