Bài luận IELTS advantages and disadvantages ở Band 6, 7 và 8

Band 6

Nowadays many people learn languages through online lessons, and fewer people go to classes in a school. Some people say that classes with a teacher are always better, but I do not agree. Many of my friends study in this way. In my opinion the advantages of this development are bigger than the disadvantages, and I will explain why in this essay.

The main advantage of online lessons is that they are flexible. FirstlyMột nhãn mở ý nhưng không nối gì với phần mở bài, people who work or look after children is not ableLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “are not able” to attend a class at a fixed time, but with online lessons they can study in the evening or at the weekend. For example, a mother can study after her children are asleep. This is the reason why I think online lessons are more convenient. Also, it is easy to start because you only need a computer. Also, they can watch the lesson again if they did not understand something, and this is very goodCụm cơ bản, mơ hồ; cần một từ chính xác hơn như “valuable” for students who learn slowly.

However, there is also a disadvantage. The students do not get enough chance to speak with other peopleNhược điểm được nêu tên nhưng không được giải thích, và không có ví dụ. In a real class they speak with the teacher and the other students all the time, and this make them more confidentLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “this makes them”. Online they often only listen to a video, so they can feel aloneChọn sai từ: “lonely” mới là từ thường dùng ở đây. Speaking is a very important part of a language, so this is a problem for some people.

To conclude, online lessons are flexible but students speak less, and the advantages are biggerPhần kết lặp lại phần mở bài bằng lời khác và không cân nhắc hai phía. So I think the advantages is more thanPhải là “advantages are greater than” hoặc “advantages outweigh” the disadvantages, and online lessons are a good choice for many people today. In the future more people will use them.

Band 7

Learning a language online has become common, and many people no longer attend classes in a school or language centre. Online study is available to almost anyone with a connection. Although this change has drawbacks, I believe that its advantages outweigh them.

The main advantage is flexibilityCâu chủ đề nêu tên chủ đề duy nhất của đoạn. Adults who work long hours or look after children often cannot commit to a class at a fixed time, whereas online lessons can be fitted into an evening or a weekend. For a parent returning from work, an hour on a fixed evening may simply be impossible, whereas a lesson that waits until the children are asleep remains available. Learners can also replay a recording when an explanation is unclear, something that a live class does not allowMệnh đề quan hệ ngắn gắn vào ý trước bằng dấu phẩy. As a result, people who might otherwise have given up can keep studying regularly.

The main disadvantage is that learners get less spontaneous speaking practice. In a classroom, students must respond immediately to a teacher or a classmate, and this pressure gradually builds confidenceCollocation tự nhiên. Speaking is a skill that grows through repeated, unplanned exchanges, so its absence matters. A learner who only watches recorded lessons may understand grammar well yet hesitate when speakLỗi dạng động từ: phải là “speaking” to a real person. However, this problem is not impossible to solve, since many online courses now offer live conversation sessionsNhược điểm được giải thích rồi được cân nhắc, và điều đó củng cố kết luận.

In conclusion, online lessons reduce the amount of natural conversation, but flexibility decides whether many people can learn at allNêu lý do đằng sau kết luận thay vì lặp lại nó. For this reason I believe the advantages are greater thanĐúng nhưng là phép so sánh đơn điệu; một động từ đa dạng hơn sẽ nâng phạm vi từ vựng the disadvantages. Learners who combine recorded lessons with regular conversation practice can gain both benefits.

Band 8

Online lessons are replacing the classroom for a growing number of language learners. The question is how much each side weighs. This development does carry a real drawback, but I believe the advantages outweigh it, chiefly because flexibility determines whether many adults study at allKết luận được nêu cùng lý do ngay ở đoạn đầu.

The decisive advantage is flexibility. A parent or shift worker cannot commit to a class that meets at a fixed hour, but can complete an online lesson at midnight if that is the only time available. The effect is practical rather than theoretical: a lesson that fits the day is far more likely to be attended. Recorded material adds a second benefit: a learner can replay an unclear explanation until it makes sense, something a classroom lesson, once finished, never permitsDấu hai chấm, đồng vị ngữ và cụm xen vào được dùng thuần thục. Together these features turn language learning from a privilege of those with regular timetablesCụm danh từ chính xác mang theo sự tương phản into something most adults can sustain.

The real disadvantage is the scarcity of unplanned speaking. In a classroom, a learner must answer a question immediately, and that mild pressure is what turns knowledge into fluencyCách diễn đạt chính xác cho tác động; a student who only watches lessons may understand the grammar perfectly yet hesitate when addressed by a real person. The concern is therefore legitimate, and it would be wrong to dismiss it. This weakness, however, is neither universal nor permanentCâu chuyển đoạn từ nhược điểm sang cân nhắc mà không cần nhãn. Many courses now include live conversation sessions, and learners can arrange practice with a partner independently.

On balance, the loss of spontaneous practice is real but remediable, whereas rigid timetables simply exclude peoplePhần kết cân nhắc hai phía và đưa lý do để kết luận đứng vững. The advantages therefore carry more weight, because a learner who cannot attend a class cannot practise anything.