Describe a person who taught you a skill

الدرجة 6

I would like to talk about my uncle Bakyt, who teachخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «taught» me to swim when I was about eight years old. He is my mother’s younger brother and he lives near Almaty, so every summer we visited his house. I remember the first lesson very well because I was, erعلامة تردد طبيعية، وحشو بسيط, really afraid of the water. We went to a small lake outside the city, and he don’t letخطأ في الفعل المساعد، والصواب «didn’t let» me jump in at once. First he held my hands and showed me how to move my legs, and then he asked me to put my face in the water, which was the most difficult part. He told me that everybody is afraid at the beginning, and this made me feel a little better. Every weekend we practiseخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «practised» for about a month, and he was always patient and never shouted when I made a mistake. At the end I could swim across the shallow part alone, and I felt very happyمفردات بسيطة، وهذا يحدّ من درجة الثروة اللغوية and proud. On the last day my mother brought some food to the lake and we had a small picnic together. This skill is important to me for two reasons. First, swimming can keep a person safe, and second, it gave me confidence, because before that month I was afraid of many thingخطأ في صيغة الجمع، والصواب «many things». Now I can go to the sea with my friends and I do not worry. You knowعبارة حشو مستخدمة للدلالة على التردد, last year I teachخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «taught» my younger sister in the same way, and I think my uncle would be proud of both of us.

الدرجة 7

I’d like to talk about my uncle Bakyt, who taught me to swim when I was about eight years old. He’s my mother’s younger brother and he lives near Almaty, so we spent every summer at his house. I remember the first lesson clearly because I was genuinely terrified of the waterأداة توكيد وصفة دقيقتان وطبيعيتان. We went to a small lake outside the city, and he wouldn’t let me jump in until I’d got used to itالماضي التام بعد «until»، مستخدم بدقة. First he held my hands and showed me how to kick, and then he ask meخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «asked me» to put my face in the water, which was by far the hardest part. He told me that everybody is afraid at the beginning, which made me feel a little better. We practised every weekend for about a month, and he was endlessly patientمتلازمة لفظية دقيقة and never shouted when I made a mistake. By the end I could swim across the shallow part on my own, and I felt proud and a little bit relievedمفردات طبيعية للتعبير عن المشاعر. On the last day my mother brought some food to the lake and we had a small picnic together. The skill matters to me for two reasons. Firstly, swimming can keep a person safe, and secondly it gave me confidence, because before that month I used to be afraid of all sorts of thingsاستخدام دقيق لصيغة «used to» للتعبير عن حالة في الماضي. Nowadays I can go to the sea with my friends without worrying. What’s moreعبارة ربط تضيف فكرة بشكل طبيعي, last year I taught my younger sister in same wayسقطت الأداة، والصواب «in the same way», and I think my uncle would be proud of both of us.

الدرجة 8

I’d like to talk about my uncle Bakyt, who taught me to swim when I was about eight. He’s my mother’s younger brother and lives near Almaty, so we spent every summer at his house. I remember the first lesson vividly, because I was petrified of the waterصفة قوية ودقيقة. We went to a small lake outside the city, and he wouldn’t let me jump in until I’d got used to it. First he held my hands and showed me how to kick, and then he coaxed me into putting my face under the waterفعل دقيق بنمط طبيعي, which was by far the hardest part. He reassured me that everybody is afraid at the beginning, which helped more than I’d expected. We practised every weekend for about a month, and he was endlessly patient: not once did he raise his voiceتقديم الفعل المساعد على الفاعل بعد ظرف منفي، مستخدم بدقة when I got something wrong. By the end I could swim across the shallow part unaided, and I felt proud and quietly relieved. On the final day my mother brought food to the lake and we celebrated with a small picnic. The skill matters to me for two reasons. Firstly, it’s a matter of safety, since anyone who spends time near water ought to be able to swim. Secondly, it changed how I deal with fear: having managed that once, I stopped assuming I’d fail before I triedعبارة حالية بصيغة التمام تربط السبب بالنتيجة. Nowadays I can spend a day at the sea with friends without a flicker of worry. Funnily enoughأداة ربط تمهد لمصادفة طريفة, last year I taught my younger sister in exactly the same way, which felt like passing the favour onصياغة اصطلاحية طبيعية, and I suspect my uncle would be proud of us both.