Describe a person who taught you a skill

Band 6

I would like to talk about my uncle Bakyt, who teach시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “taught” me to swim when I was about eight years old. He is my mother’s younger brother and he lives near Almaty, so every summer we visited his house. I remember the first lesson very well because I was, er자연스러운 머뭇거림 표지, 가벼운 군말, really afraid of the water. We went to a small lake outside the city, and he don’t let조동사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “didn’t let” me jump in at once. First he held my hands and showed me how to move my legs, and then he asked me to put my face in the water, which was the most difficult part. He told me that everybody is afraid at the beginning, and this made me feel a little better. Every weekend we practise시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “practised” for about a month, and he was always patient and never shouted when I made a mistake. At the end I could swim across the shallow part alone, and I felt very happy기본적인 어휘, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 and proud. On the last day my mother brought some food to the lake and we had a small picnic together. This skill is important to me for two reasons. First, swimming can keep a person safe, and second, it gave me confidence, because before that month I was afraid of many thing복수형 오류: 올바른 형태는 “many things”. Now I can go to the sea with my friends and I do not worry. You know머뭇거림을 나타내는 군말 표현, last year I teach시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “taught” my younger sister in the same way, and I think my uncle would be proud of both of us.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my uncle Bakyt, who taught me to swim when I was about eight years old. He’s my mother’s younger brother and he lives near Almaty, so we spent every summer at his house. I remember the first lesson clearly because I was genuinely terrified of the water정확하고 자연스러운 강조어와 형용사. We went to a small lake outside the city, and he wouldn’t let me jump in until I’d got used to it“until” 뒤의 과거완료를 정확하게 사용. First he held my hands and showed me how to kick, and then he ask me시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “asked me” to put my face in the water, which was by far the hardest part. He told me that everybody is afraid at the beginning, which made me feel a little better. We practised every weekend for about a month, and he was endlessly patient정확한 콜로케이션 and never shouted when I made a mistake. By the end I could swim across the shallow part on my own, and I felt proud and a little bit relieved자연스러운 감정 어휘. On the last day my mother brought some food to the lake and we had a small picnic together. The skill matters to me for two reasons. Firstly, swimming can keep a person safe, and secondly it gave me confidence, because before that month I used to be afraid of all sorts of things과거의 상태를 나타내는 “used to”를 정확하게 사용. Nowadays I can go to the sea with my friends without worrying. What’s more연결 표현이 자연스럽게 요점을 더함, last year I taught my younger sister in same way관사 누락: 올바른 형태는 “in the same way”, and I think my uncle would be proud of both of us.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my uncle Bakyt, who taught me to swim when I was about eight. He’s my mother’s younger brother and lives near Almaty, so we spent every summer at his house. I remember the first lesson vividly, because I was petrified of the water강하고 정확한 형용사. We went to a small lake outside the city, and he wouldn’t let me jump in until I’d got used to it. First he held my hands and showed me how to kick, and then he coaxed me into putting my face under the water자연스러운 동사 패턴을 갖춘 정확한 동사, which was by far the hardest part. He reassured me that everybody is afraid at the beginning, which helped more than I’d expected. We practised every weekend for about a month, and he was endlessly patient: not once did he raise his voice부정 부사어 뒤의 도치를 정확하게 사용 when I got something wrong. By the end I could swim across the shallow part unaided, and I felt proud and quietly relieved. On the final day my mother brought food to the lake and we celebrated with a small picnic. The skill matters to me for two reasons. Firstly, it’s a matter of safety, since anyone who spends time near water ought to be able to swim. Secondly, it changed how I deal with fear: having managed that once, I stopped assuming I’d fail before I tried원인과 결과를 잇는 완료 분사구문. Nowadays I can spend a day at the sea with friends without a flicker of worry. Funnily enough반가운 우연을 이끄는 담화 표지, last year I taught my younger sister in exactly the same way, which felt like passing the favour on자연스러운 관용 표현, and I suspect my uncle would be proud of us both.