Describe a person who taught you a skill

Band 6

I would like to talk about my uncle Bakyt, who teachใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “taught” me to swim when I was about eight years old. He is my mother’s younger brother and he lives near Almaty, so every summer we visited his house. I remember the first lesson very well because I was, erหยุดคิดอย่างเป็นธรรมชาติ คำเติมไม่รบกวน, really afraid of the water. We went to a small lake outside the city, and he don’t letใช้กริยาช่วยผิด ต้องเป็น “didn’t let” me jump in at once. First he held my hands and showed me how to move my legs, and then he asked me to put my face in the water, which was the most difficult part. He told me that everybody is afraid at the beginning, and this made me feel a little better. Every weekend we practiseใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “practised” for about a month, and he was always patient and never shouted when I made a mistake. At the end I could swim across the shallow part alone, and I felt very happyคำศัพท์พื้นฐาน จำกัดคะแนน Lexical Resource and proud. On the last day my mother brought some food to the lake and we had a small picnic together. This skill is important to me for two reasons. First, swimming can keep a person safe, and second, it gave me confidence, because before that month I was afraid of many thingขาดรูปพหูพจน์ ต้องเป็น “many things”. Now I can go to the sea with my friends and I do not worry. You knowใช้วลีเติมเป็นตัวหยุดคิด, last year I teachใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “taught” my younger sister in the same way, and I think my uncle would be proud of both of us.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my uncle Bakyt, who taught me to swim when I was about eight years old. He’s my mother’s younger brother and he lives near Almaty, so we spent every summer at his house. I remember the first lesson clearly because I was genuinely terrified of the waterคำเน้นและคำคุณศัพท์ที่แม่นยำและเป็นธรรมชาติ. We went to a small lake outside the city, and he wouldn’t let me jump in until I’d got used to itใช้ past perfect หลัง “until” ได้ถูกต้อง. First he held my hands and showed me how to kick, and then he ask meใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “asked me” to put my face in the water, which was by far the hardest part. He told me that everybody is afraid at the beginning, which made me feel a little better. We practised every weekend for about a month, and he was endlessly patientcollocation ที่แม่นยำ and never shouted when I made a mistake. By the end I could swim across the shallow part on my own, and I felt proud and a little bit relievedคำศัพท์แสดงอารมณ์ที่เป็นธรรมชาติ. On the last day my mother brought some food to the lake and we had a small picnic together. The skill matters to me for two reasons. Firstly, swimming can keep a person safe, and secondly it gave me confidence, because before that month I used to be afraid of all sorts of thingsใช้ “used to” กับสภาพในอดีตได้ถูกต้อง. Nowadays I can go to the sea with my friends without worrying. What’s moreวลีเชื่อมเพิ่มประเด็นได้เป็นธรรมชาติ, last year I taught my younger sister in same wayขาดคำนำหน้านาม ต้องเป็น “in the same way”, and I think my uncle would be proud of both of us.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my uncle Bakyt, who taught me to swim when I was about eight. He’s my mother’s younger brother and lives near Almaty, so we spent every summer at his house. I remember the first lesson vividly, because I was petrified of the waterคำคุณศัพท์ที่หนักแน่นและแม่นยำ. We went to a small lake outside the city, and he wouldn’t let me jump in until I’d got used to it. First he held my hands and showed me how to kick, and then he coaxed me into putting my face under the waterกริยาที่แม่นยำพร้อมโครงสร้างกริยาที่เป็นธรรมชาติ, which was by far the hardest part. He reassured me that everybody is afraid at the beginning, which helped more than I’d expected. We practised every weekend for about a month, and he was endlessly patient: not once did he raise his voiceใช้ inversion หลัง negative adverbial ได้ถูกต้อง when I got something wrong. By the end I could swim across the shallow part unaided, and I felt proud and quietly relieved. On the final day my mother brought food to the lake and we celebrated with a small picnic. The skill matters to me for two reasons. Firstly, it’s a matter of safety, since anyone who spends time near water ought to be able to swim. Secondly, it changed how I deal with fear: having managed that once, I stopped assuming I’d fail before I triedperfect participle clause เชื่อมเหตุกับผล. Nowadays I can spend a day at the sea with friends without a flicker of worry. Funnily enoughdiscourse marker ที่นำเข้าสู่เรื่องบังเอิญน่ายินดี, last year I taught my younger sister in exactly the same way, which felt like passing the favour onถ้อยคำแบบสำนวนที่เป็นธรรมชาติ, and I suspect my uncle would be proud of us both.