Describe a person you know who has healthy habits

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I would like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We meetKesalahan sesaat pada tenses: seharusnya “met” about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helpKesalahan sesaat pada tenses: seharusnya “helped” me with the pronunciation. Now we are good friends. He works as a nurse in the city hospital, so his days are very long, but he never skipKesalahan kesesuaian subjek dan kata kerja: seharusnya “never skips” his routine. He has a very healthy lifestyle, and I think it is the bestSuperlatif dasar; membatasi Lexical Resource lifestyle I know. Every morning he gets up at five, you knowFrasa pengisi yang dipakai sebagai penanda ragu, and he runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makeKesalahan kesesuaian subjek dan kata kerja: seharusnya “makes” breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, because he does not like food from outsidePilihan kata yang kurang tepat; “restaurants” atau “takeaways” akan lebih jelas. He drinks a lot of water and he do notKesalahan kata kerja bantu: seharusnya “does not” drink sugary drinks at all. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents and they eat together, with no television on, so it is a very nice timeKosakata dasar; membatasi Lexical Resource. In the evening he erPenanda jeda yang wajar, kata pengisi kecil goes to bed at ten, so he is never tired. I feel respect for him, and also a little envy, because I can notKesalahan ejaan dan bentuk: seharusnya “cannot” atau “can’t” wake up so early. But he inspired me, and now I try to walk after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run, and I was very slow, but he waited for me and he did not laugh at me, so I felt happy. I think it is a good thingKosakata dasar; membatasi Lexical Resource to have a friend like him.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We met about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helped me with my pronunciation. Now we’re good friends. He works as a nurse at the city hospital, so his days are long, but he never skips his routine. He has one of the healthiest lifestyles of anyone I know. Every morning he gets up at five and runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makes breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, as he don’tKesalahan kata kerja bantu: seharusnya “doesn’t” like eating out. He drinks plenty of water and cuts out sugary drinks altogetherPhrasal verb yang tepat dengan kata keterangan yang alami. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents and they eat together with the television off, which he says is good for the whole family. In the evening he’s in bed by ten, so he’s rarely tiredKata keterangan frekuensi yang akurat during the day. I feel respect for him, and also a little envy, since I can’t seem to get up that earlyPemakaian “can’t seem to” yang alami dengan klausa alasan. But he’s inspired me, and now I try to walk after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run and was painfully slow, but he waited for me and never once made me feel embarrassed. It’s encouragingLebih tepat daripada kata sifat positif yang umum to have a friend who leads by example, if you see what I meanFrasa pengecekan yang alami dengan nada percakapan rather than telling me what to do.

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I’d like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We met about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helped me with my pronunciation. Now we’re good friends. He’s a nurse at the city hospital, so his days are long, yet he never lets his routine slip. He has one of the healthiest lifestyles of anyone I know. He’s a real early riserFrasa nomina idiomatis yang dipakai dengan alami: he gets up at five and runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makes breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, since he’d rather not eat out. He drinks plenty of water and has cut out sugary drinks altogetherPhrasal verb yang tepat dengan kata keterangan yang alami. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents, and they eat together with the television off, which he says is as good for the mind as for the body. In the evening he’s in bed by ten, which is why he is rarely tired during the dayKlausa relatif yang menghubungkan sebab dan akibat. I feel respect for him, and a little envy too, since I can’t seem to get up that early. That said,Penanda wacana yang membuka kontras he’s inspired me to start walking after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run and was painfully slow, but he stayed beside me the whole way and never once made me feel self-conscious. It’s reassuringKata sifat yang tepat untuk efek emosional yang tenang to have a friend who leads by example rather than lecturing me, and it has made me realise that healthy habits are built one small step at a time.