Describe a person you know who has healthy habits

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I would like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We meetПомилка в часі: має бути «met» about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helpПомилка в часі: має бути «helped» me with the pronunciation. Now we are good friends. He works as a nurse in the city hospital, so his days are very long, but he never skipНеузгодженість підмета й присудка: має бути «never skips» his routine. He has a very healthy lifestyle, and I think it is the bestБазовий найвищий ступінь; обмежує Lexical Resource lifestyle I know. Every morning he gets up at five, you knowСлово-паразит як маркер вагання, and he runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makeНеузгодженість підмета й присудка: має бути «makes» breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, because he does not like food from outsideНеточний вибір слова; «restaurants» чи «takeaways» було б зрозуміліше. He drinks a lot of water and he do notПомилка у допоміжному дієслові: має бути «does not» drink sugary drinks at all. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents and they eat together, with no television on, so it is a very nice timeБазова лексика; обмежує Lexical Resource. In the evening he erПриродна пауза вагання, незначне слово-паразит goes to bed at ten, so he is never tired. I feel respect for him, and also a little envy, because I can notПомилка в написанні та формі: має бути «cannot» або «can’t» wake up so early. But he inspired me, and now I try to walk after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run, and I was very slow, but he waited for me and he did not laugh at me, so I felt happy. I think it is a good thingБазова лексика; обмежує Lexical Resource to have a friend like him.

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I’d like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We met about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helped me with my pronunciation. Now we’re good friends. He works as a nurse at the city hospital, so his days are long, but he never skips his routine. He has one of the healthiest lifestyles of anyone I know. Every morning he gets up at five and runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makes breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, as he don’tПомилка у допоміжному дієслові: має бути «doesn’t» like eating out. He drinks plenty of water and cuts out sugary drinks altogetherТочне фразове дієслово з природним прислівником. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents and they eat together with the television off, which he says is good for the whole family. In the evening he’s in bed by ten, so he’s rarely tiredПравильний прислівник частотності during the day. I feel respect for him, and also a little envy, since I can’t seem to get up that earlyПриродне вживання «can’t seem to» із підрядним причини. But he’s inspired me, and now I try to walk after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run and was painfully slow, but he waited for me and never once made me feel embarrassed. It’s encouragingТочніше за загальне позитивне прикметникове слово to have a friend who leads by example, if you see what I meanПриродна фраза-перевірка в розмовному тоні rather than telling me what to do.

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I’d like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We met about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helped me with my pronunciation. Now we’re good friends. He’s a nurse at the city hospital, so his days are long, yet he never lets his routine slip. He has one of the healthiest lifestyles of anyone I know. He’s a real early riserІдіоматична іменникова група, вжита природно: he gets up at five and runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makes breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, since he’d rather not eat out. He drinks plenty of water and has cut out sugary drinks altogetherТочне фразове дієслово з природним прислівником. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents, and they eat together with the television off, which he says is as good for the mind as for the body. In the evening he’s in bed by ten, which is why he is rarely tired during the dayRelative clause, що пов’язує причину й наслідок. I feel respect for him, and a little envy too, since I can’t seem to get up that early. That said,Дискурсивний маркер, що вводить протиставлення he’s inspired me to start walking after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run and was painfully slow, but he stayed beside me the whole way and never once made me feel self-conscious. It’s reassuringТочне прикметникове слово для тихого емоційного ефекту to have a friend who leads by example rather than lecturing me, and it has made me realise that healthy habits are built one small step at a time.