Describe a person you know who has healthy habits

Band 6

I would like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We meetLỗi thì: phải là “met” about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helpLỗi thì: phải là “helped” me with the pronunciation. Now we are good friends. He works as a nurse in the city hospital, so his days are very long, but he never skipLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “never skips” his routine. He has a very healthy lifestyle, and I think it is the bestCấp so sánh nhất cơ bản, hạn chế Lexical Resource lifestyle I know. Every morning he gets up at five, you knowCụm từ đệm dùng để ngập ngừng, and he runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makeLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “makes” breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, because he does not like food from outsideTừ dùng thiếu chính xác; “restaurants” hoặc “takeaways” sẽ rõ nghĩa hơn. He drinks a lot of water and he do notLỗi trợ động từ: phải là “does not” drink sugary drinks at all. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents and they eat together, with no television on, so it is a very nice timeTừ vựng cơ bản, hạn chế Lexical Resource. In the evening he erTừ ngập ngừng tự nhiên, từ đệm không đáng kể goes to bed at ten, so he is never tired. I feel respect for him, and also a little envy, because I can notLỗi chính tả và dạng từ: phải là “cannot” hoặc “can’t” wake up so early. But he inspired me, and now I try to walk after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run, and I was very slow, but he waited for me and he did not laugh at me, so I felt happy. I think it is a good thingTừ vựng cơ bản, hạn chế Lexical Resource to have a friend like him.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We met about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helped me with my pronunciation. Now we’re good friends. He works as a nurse at the city hospital, so his days are long, but he never skips his routine. He has one of the healthiest lifestyles of anyone I know. Every morning he gets up at five and runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makes breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, as he don’tLỗi trợ động từ: phải là “doesn’t” like eating out. He drinks plenty of water and cuts out sugary drinks altogetherCụm động từ chính xác kèm trạng từ tự nhiên. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents and they eat together with the television off, which he says is good for the whole family. In the evening he’s in bed by ten, so he’s rarely tiredTrạng từ chỉ tần suất dùng chính xác during the day. I feel respect for him, and also a little envy, since I can’t seem to get up that early“can’t seem to” dùng tự nhiên kèm mệnh đề chỉ lý do. But he’s inspired me, and now I try to walk after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run and was painfully slow, but he waited for me and never once made me feel embarrassed. It’s encouragingChính xác hơn một tính từ tích cực chung chung to have a friend who leads by example, if you see what I meanCụm hỏi lại tự nhiên, mang giọng trò chuyện rather than telling me what to do.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We met about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helped me with my pronunciation. Now we’re good friends. He’s a nurse at the city hospital, so his days are long, yet he never lets his routine slip. He has one of the healthiest lifestyles of anyone I know. He’s a real early riserCụm danh từ mang tính thành ngữ, dùng tự nhiên: he gets up at five and runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makes breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, since he’d rather not eat out. He drinks plenty of water and has cut out sugary drinks altogetherCụm động từ chính xác kèm trạng từ tự nhiên. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents, and they eat together with the television off, which he says is as good for the mind as for the body. In the evening he’s in bed by ten, which is why he is rarely tired during the dayMệnh đề quan hệ nối nguyên nhân và kết quả. I feel respect for him, and a little envy too, since I can’t seem to get up that early. That said,Discourse marker dẫn vào một sự đối lập he’s inspired me to start walking after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run and was painfully slow, but he stayed beside me the whole way and never once made me feel self-conscious. It’s reassuringTính từ chính xác để nói về tác động cảm xúc nhẹ nhàng to have a friend who leads by example rather than lecturing me, and it has made me realise that healthy habits are built one small step at a time.