Describe a person you know who has healthy habits

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I would like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We meetОшибка времени: должно быть «met» about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helpОшибка времени: должно быть «helped» me with the pronunciation. Now we are good friends. He works as a nurse in the city hospital, so his days are very long, but he never skipОшибка согласования подлежащего и сказуемого: должно быть «never skips» his routine. He has a very healthy lifestyle, and I think it is the bestПростая превосходная степень; ограничивает Lexical Resource lifestyle I know. Every morning he gets up at five, you knowФраза-паразит, используемая как заминка, and he runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makeОшибка согласования подлежащего и сказуемого: должно быть «makes» breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, because he does not like food from outsideНеточный выбор слова; точнее были бы «restaurants» или «takeaways». He drinks a lot of water and he do notОшибка во вспомогательном глаголе: должно быть «does not» drink sugary drinks at all. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents and they eat together, with no television on, so it is a very nice timeПростая лексика; ограничивает Lexical Resource. In the evening he erЕстественная заминка, некритичное слово-паразит goes to bed at ten, so he is never tired. I feel respect for him, and also a little envy, because I can notОшибка написания и формы: должно быть «cannot» или «can’t» wake up so early. But he inspired me, and now I try to walk after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run, and I was very slow, but he waited for me and he did not laugh at me, so I felt happy. I think it is a good thingПростая лексика; ограничивает Lexical Resource to have a friend like him.

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I’d like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We met about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helped me with my pronunciation. Now we’re good friends. He works as a nurse at the city hospital, so his days are long, but he never skips his routine. He has one of the healthiest lifestyles of anyone I know. Every morning he gets up at five and runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makes breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, as he don’tОшибка во вспомогательном глаголе: должно быть «doesn’t» like eating out. He drinks plenty of water and cuts out sugary drinks altogetherТочный фразовый глагол с естественным наречием. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents and they eat together with the television off, which he says is good for the whole family. In the evening he’s in bed by ten, so he’s rarely tiredТочное наречие частотности during the day. I feel respect for him, and also a little envy, since I can’t seem to get up that earlyЕстественное употребление «can’t seem to» с придаточным причины. But he’s inspired me, and now I try to walk after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run and was painfully slow, but he waited for me and never once made me feel embarrassed. It’s encouragingТочнее, чем общее положительное прилагательное to have a friend who leads by example, if you see what I meanЕстественная фраза-проверка контакта в разговорном тоне rather than telling me what to do.

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I’d like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We met about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helped me with my pronunciation. Now we’re good friends. He’s a nurse at the city hospital, so his days are long, yet he never lets his routine slip. He has one of the healthiest lifestyles of anyone I know. He’s a real early riserИдиоматичная именная группа, использованная естественно: he gets up at five and runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makes breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, since he’d rather not eat out. He drinks plenty of water and has cut out sugary drinks altogetherТочный фразовый глагол с естественным наречием. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents, and they eat together with the television off, which he says is as good for the mind as for the body. In the evening he’s in bed by ten, which is why he is rarely tired during the dayОпределительное придаточное, связывающее причину и следствие. I feel respect for him, and a little envy too, since I can’t seem to get up that early. That said,Дискурсивный маркер, вводящий противопоставление he’s inspired me to start walking after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run and was painfully slow, but he stayed beside me the whole way and never once made me feel self-conscious. It’s reassuringТочное прилагательное для тихого эмоционального эффекта to have a friend who leads by example rather than lecturing me, and it has made me realise that healthy habits are built one small step at a time.