Describe a person you know who has healthy habits

Band 6

I would like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We meet시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “met” about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always help시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “helped” me with the pronunciation. Now we are good friends. He works as a nurse in the city hospital, so his days are very long, but he never skip주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “never skips” his routine. He has a very healthy lifestyle, and I think it is the best기본적인 최상급, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 lifestyle I know. Every morning he gets up at five, you know머뭇거림 표지로 쓰인 군말, and he runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he make주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “makes” breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, because he does not like food from outside부정확한 단어 선택: “restaurants”나 “takeaways”가 더 분명함. He drinks a lot of water and he do not조동사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “does not” drink sugary drinks at all. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents and they eat together, with no television on, so it is a very nice time기본적인 어휘, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함. In the evening he er자연스러운 머뭇거림 표지, 가벼운 군말 goes to bed at ten, so he is never tired. I feel respect for him, and also a little envy, because I can not철자 오류: 올바른 형태는 “cannot” 또는 “can’t” wake up so early. But he inspired me, and now I try to walk after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run, and I was very slow, but he waited for me and he did not laugh at me, so I felt happy. I think it is a good thing기본적인 어휘, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 to have a friend like him.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We met about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helped me with my pronunciation. Now we’re good friends. He works as a nurse at the city hospital, so his days are long, but he never skips his routine. He has one of the healthiest lifestyles of anyone I know. Every morning he gets up at five and runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makes breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, as he don’t조동사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “doesn’t” like eating out. He drinks plenty of water and cuts out sugary drinks altogether자연스러운 부사가 붙은 정확한 구동사. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents and they eat together with the television off, which he says is good for the whole family. In the evening he’s in bed by ten, so he’s rarely tired정확한 빈도 부사 during the day. I feel respect for him, and also a little envy, since I can’t seem to get up that early이유절과 함께 “can’t seem to”를 자연스럽게 사용. But he’s inspired me, and now I try to walk after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run and was painfully slow, but he waited for me and never once made me feel embarrassed. It’s encouraging막연한 긍정 형용사보다 정확한 표현 to have a friend who leads by example, if you see what I mean대화체의 자연스러운 확인 표현 rather than telling me what to do.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We met about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helped me with my pronunciation. Now we’re good friends. He’s a nurse at the city hospital, so his days are long, yet he never lets his routine slip. He has one of the healthiest lifestyles of anyone I know. He’s a real early riser관용적인 명사구를 자연스럽게 사용: he gets up at five and runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makes breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, since he’d rather not eat out. He drinks plenty of water and has cut out sugary drinks altogether자연스러운 부사가 붙은 정확한 구동사. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents, and they eat together with the television off, which he says is as good for the mind as for the body. In the evening he’s in bed by ten, which is why he is rarely tired during the day원인과 결과를 잇는 관계절. I feel respect for him, and a little envy too, since I can’t seem to get up that early. That said,대조를 이끄는 담화 표지 he’s inspired me to start walking after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run and was painfully slow, but he stayed beside me the whole way and never once made me feel self-conscious. It’s reassuring조용한 정서적 효과를 나타내는 정확한 형용사 to have a friend who leads by example rather than lecturing me, and it has made me realise that healthy habits are built one small step at a time.