Describe a person you know who has healthy habits

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I would like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We meetZaman hatası: “met” olmalı about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helpZaman hatası: “helped” olmalı me with the pronunciation. Now we are good friends. He works as a nurse in the city hospital, so his days are very long, but he never skipÖzne-yüklem uyumu hatası: “never skips” olmalı his routine. He has a very healthy lifestyle, and I think it is the bestBasit superlative; Lexical Resource puanını sınırlıyor lifestyle I know. Every morning he gets up at five, you knowDuraksama işareti olarak kullanılan dolgu ifadesi, and he runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makeÖzne-yüklem uyumu hatası: “makes” olmalı breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, because he does not like food from outsideİsabetsiz kelime seçimi; “restaurants” ya da “takeaways” daha net olurdu. He drinks a lot of water and he do notYardımcı fiil hatası: “does not” olmalı drink sugary drinks at all. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents and they eat together, with no television on, so it is a very nice timeBasit kelime; Lexical Resource puanını sınırlıyor. In the evening he erDoğal duraksama, önemsiz dolgu sözcüğü goes to bed at ten, so he is never tired. I feel respect for him, and also a little envy, because I can notYazım ve biçim hatası: “cannot” ya da “can’t” olmalı wake up so early. But he inspired me, and now I try to walk after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run, and I was very slow, but he waited for me and he did not laugh at me, so I felt happy. I think it is a good thingBasit kelime; Lexical Resource puanını sınırlıyor to have a friend like him.

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I’d like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We met about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helped me with my pronunciation. Now we’re good friends. He works as a nurse at the city hospital, so his days are long, but he never skips his routine. He has one of the healthiest lifestyles of anyone I know. Every morning he gets up at five and runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makes breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, as he don’tYardımcı fiil hatası: “doesn’t” olmalı like eating out. He drinks plenty of water and cuts out sugary drinks altogetherDoğal bir zarfla isabetli phrasal verb. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents and they eat together with the television off, which he says is good for the whole family. In the evening he’s in bed by ten, so he’s rarely tiredDoğru kullanılmış sıklık zarfı during the day. I feel respect for him, and also a little envy, since I can’t seem to get up that earlyNeden cümlesiyle “can’t seem to” doğal kullanılmış. But he’s inspired me, and now I try to walk after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run and was painfully slow, but he waited for me and never once made me feel embarrassed. It’s encouragingGenel bir olumlu sıfattan daha isabetli to have a friend who leads by example, if you see what I meanKonuşma tonunda, dinleyiciyi yoklayan doğal ifade rather than telling me what to do.

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I’d like to talk about my friend Dilshan, who lives in Kandy in Sri Lanka. We met about three years ago at a weekend English class, because we sat at the same table and he always helped me with my pronunciation. Now we’re good friends. He’s a nurse at the city hospital, so his days are long, yet he never lets his routine slip. He has one of the healthiest lifestyles of anyone I know. He’s a real early riserDoğal kullanılmış deyimsel noun phrase: he gets up at five and runs round the lake near his house for forty minutes. After that he makes breakfast at home, usually fruit and eggs, since he’d rather not eat out. He drinks plenty of water and has cut out sugary drinks altogetherDoğal bir zarfla isabetli phrasal verb. On Sundays he cooks lunch for his parents, and they eat together with the television off, which he says is as good for the mind as for the body. In the evening he’s in bed by ten, which is why he is rarely tired during the dayNeden ile sonucu bağlayan relative clause. I feel respect for him, and a little envy too, since I can’t seem to get up that early. That said,Karşıtlık açan discourse marker he’s inspired me to start walking after dinner every day. Last month I joined him for a run and was painfully slow, but he stayed beside me the whole way and never once made me feel self-conscious. It’s reassuringSakin bir duygusal etki için isabetli sıfat to have a friend who leads by example rather than lecturing me, and it has made me realise that healthy habits are built one small step at a time.