Describe a person who helped you solve a problem

Band 6

I would like to talk about my cousin’s husband, Ganzorig, who helpKesalahan sesaat pada tenses: seharusnya “helped” me with a problem in my family’s shop last November. The shop is in Ulaanbaatar and it sells things for school, and I work there on Saturdays. My aunt owns it, and that year she was giving me more responsibility, so I wanted to do the job well. At that time I looked after the stock list on the computer, but the numbers on the screen wasKesalahan kesesuaian subjek dan kata kerja: seharusnya “were” not the same as the things on the shelves, and I did not know why. I was very stressedPenguat dan kata sifat dasar; membatasi Lexical Resource because my aunt wanted the report on Monday. I, erPenanda jeda yang wajar, kata pengisi kecil, tried to find the mistake for two evenings, but I could not. Then Ganzorig, who is an accountant, comeKesalahan sesaat pada tenses: seharusnya “came” to the shop on Sunday when it was closed. He sat next to me and checked the list line by line. After one hour he findKesalahan sesaat pada tenses: seharusnya “found” that two deliveries were written two times, so the total was too big. He also showed me an easy way to check the list every week, you knowFrasa pengisi yang dipakai sebagai penanda ragu, so I will not have the same problem again. I felt very happyKata sifat dasar; membatasi Lexical Resource and a little shy because the mistake was so simple. It was make meKesalahan bentuk: seharusnya “It made me” feel more confident about my work, and I am really thankful to him. Now I check the list every Saturday before I go home, and my aunt says the report is always correct.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my cousin’s husband, Ganzorig, who helped me with a problem in my family’s shop last November. The shop is in Ulaanbaatar and sells school supplies, and I work there on Saturdays. My aunt owns it, and that year she’d started trusting me with more responsibility, so I wanted to do the job properly. At that time I was looking after the stock list on the computer, but the numbers on the screen didn’t match what was actually on the shelvesKlausa perbandingan yang akurat dengan past tense, and I couldn’t work out why. I was under a lot of pressureKolokasi yang alami sebagai ganti kata sifat dasar because my aunt wanted the report on Monday. I’d spent two evenings searching for the mistake and I was getting nowhere, to be honestPenanda wacana alami yang menandakan rasa frustrasi. Then Ganzorig, who’s an accountant, came to the shop on Sunday, when it was closed. He sat down beside me and went through the list line by line, and within an hour he’d found that two deliveries had been entered twice, which made the total far too high. He also showed me a simple way to check the list every week, so it wouldn’t happen again. Afterwards I felt enormously relievedPenguat dan kata sifat yang tepat, and a little embarrassed because the mistake was so much simpleKesalahan penguat: seharusnya “so simple”. It gave me a lot more confidenceFrasa alami untuk dampak yang bertahan lama in my work, and I’m genuinely grateful to him. These days I check the list before I leave every Saturday, and my aunt hasn’t found a single error since.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my cousin’s husband, Ganzorig, who rescued me from a problem in my family’s shop last November. The shop, in Ulaanbaatar, sells school supplies, and I work there on Saturdays. My aunt owns it, and she had only recently started entrusting me with more responsibility, so I was determined to get it right. At the time I was responsible for the stock list on the computer, but the figures on the screen simply refused to match what was on the shelvesFrasa yang alami dan hidup dengan past tense yang akurat, and I couldn’t work out why. I was under real pressureKolokasi yang tepat, since my aunt expected the report on Monday, and after two evenings of searching I was at a complete lossFrasa idiomatis untuk tidak punya gagasan. Then Ganzorig, an accountant, came to the shop on Sunday, when it was closed. He sat beside me, went through the list line by line, and within an hour had spotted that two deliveries had been entered twice, which inflated the totalPast perfect dan klausa relatif yang dipakai dengan akurat. He also talked me through a simple weekly checkUngkapan phrasal yang tepat so that it wouldn’t happen again. I felt enormously relieved, and slightly embarrassed that the cause was so simple, but what stayed with me more than anythingPenanda wacana alami yang membuka refleksi was how patiently he explained it, without making me feel foolish. It was a weight off my mind, and it has made me far readier to ask for help early instead of struggling alone. These days I check the list before locking up every Saturday, and the weekly routine he suggested has not failed me once.