Describe a person who helped you solve a problem

Band 6

I would like to talk about my cousin’s husband, Ganzorig, who help시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “helped” me with a problem in my family’s shop last November. The shop is in Ulaanbaatar and it sells things for school, and I work there on Saturdays. My aunt owns it, and that year she was giving me more responsibility, so I wanted to do the job well. At that time I looked after the stock list on the computer, but the numbers on the screen was주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “were” not the same as the things on the shelves, and I did not know why. I was very stressed기본적인 강조어와 형용사, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 because my aunt wanted the report on Monday. I, er자연스러운 머뭇거림 표지, 가벼운 군말, tried to find the mistake for two evenings, but I could not. Then Ganzorig, who is an accountant, come시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “came” to the shop on Sunday when it was closed. He sat next to me and checked the list line by line. After one hour he find시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “found” that two deliveries were written two times, so the total was too big. He also showed me an easy way to check the list every week, you know머뭇거림 표지로 쓰인 군말, so I will not have the same problem again. I felt very happy기본적인 형용사, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 and a little shy because the mistake was so simple. It was make me형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “It made me” feel more confident about my work, and I am really thankful to him. Now I check the list every Saturday before I go home, and my aunt says the report is always correct.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my cousin’s husband, Ganzorig, who helped me with a problem in my family’s shop last November. The shop is in Ulaanbaatar and sells school supplies, and I work there on Saturdays. My aunt owns it, and that year she’d started trusting me with more responsibility, so I wanted to do the job properly. At that time I was looking after the stock list on the computer, but the numbers on the screen didn’t match what was actually on the shelves과거 시제를 쓴 비교절을 정확하게 사용, and I couldn’t work out why. I was under a lot of pressure기본적인 형용사 대신 쓴 자연스러운 콜로케이션 because my aunt wanted the report on Monday. I’d spent two evenings searching for the mistake and I was getting nowhere, to be honest답답함을 드러내는 자연스러운 담화 표지. Then Ganzorig, who’s an accountant, came to the shop on Sunday, when it was closed. He sat down beside me and went through the list line by line, and within an hour he’d found that two deliveries had been entered twice, which made the total far too high. He also showed me a simple way to check the list every week, so it wouldn’t happen again. Afterwards I felt enormously relieved정확한 부사와 형용사, and a little embarrassed because the mistake was so much simple강조 부사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “so simple”. It gave me a lot more confidence지속되는 효과를 나타내는 자연스러운 표현 in my work, and I’m genuinely grateful to him. These days I check the list before I leave every Saturday, and my aunt hasn’t found a single error since.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my cousin’s husband, Ganzorig, who rescued me from a problem in my family’s shop last November. The shop, in Ulaanbaatar, sells school supplies, and I work there on Saturdays. My aunt owns it, and she had only recently started entrusting me with more responsibility, so I was determined to get it right. At the time I was responsible for the stock list on the computer, but the figures on the screen simply refused to match what was on the shelves생생하고 자연스러운 표현, 과거 시제를 정확하게 사용, and I couldn’t work out why. I was under real pressure정확한 콜로케이션, since my aunt expected the report on Monday, and after two evenings of searching I was at a complete loss아무 생각이 나지 않는 상태를 나타내는 관용적인 표현. Then Ganzorig, an accountant, came to the shop on Sunday, when it was closed. He sat beside me, went through the list line by line, and within an hour had spotted that two deliveries had been entered twice, which inflated the total과거완료와 관계절을 정확하게 사용. He also talked me through a simple weekly check정확한 구동사 표현 so that it wouldn’t happen again. I felt enormously relieved, and slightly embarrassed that the cause was so simple, but what stayed with me more than anything성찰을 이끄는 자연스러운 담화 표지 was how patiently he explained it, without making me feel foolish. It was a weight off my mind, and it has made me far readier to ask for help early instead of struggling alone. These days I check the list before locking up every Saturday, and the weekly routine he suggested has not failed me once.