Describe a person who helped you solve a problem

Band 6

I would like to talk about my cousin’s husband, Ganzorig, who helpใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “helped” me with a problem in my family’s shop last November. The shop is in Ulaanbaatar and it sells things for school, and I work there on Saturdays. My aunt owns it, and that year she was giving me more responsibility, so I wanted to do the job well. At that time I looked after the stock list on the computer, but the numbers on the screen wasประธานกับกริยาไม่สอดคล้องกัน ต้องเป็น “were” not the same as the things on the shelves, and I did not know why. I was very stressedคำขยายและคำคุณศัพท์พื้นฐาน จำกัดคะแนน Lexical Resource because my aunt wanted the report on Monday. I, erหยุดคิดอย่างเป็นธรรมชาติ คำเติมไม่รบกวน, tried to find the mistake for two evenings, but I could not. Then Ganzorig, who is an accountant, comeใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “came” to the shop on Sunday when it was closed. He sat next to me and checked the list line by line. After one hour he findใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “found” that two deliveries were written two times, so the total was too big. He also showed me an easy way to check the list every week, you knowคำเติมที่ใช้เป็นเครื่องหมายหยุดคิด, so I will not have the same problem again. I felt very happyคำคุณศัพท์พื้นฐาน จำกัดคะแนน Lexical Resource and a little shy because the mistake was so simple. It was make meใช้รูปผิด ต้องเป็น “It made me” feel more confident about my work, and I am really thankful to him. Now I check the list every Saturday before I go home, and my aunt says the report is always correct.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my cousin’s husband, Ganzorig, who helped me with a problem in my family’s shop last November. The shop is in Ulaanbaatar and sells school supplies, and I work there on Saturdays. My aunt owns it, and that year she’d started trusting me with more responsibility, so I wanted to do the job properly. At that time I was looking after the stock list on the computer, but the numbers on the screen didn’t match what was actually on the shelvesประโยคเปรียบเทียบที่ใช้ past tense ได้ถูกต้อง, and I couldn’t work out why. I was under a lot of pressureคำที่มักใช้คู่กันตามธรรมชาติ แทนคำคุณศัพท์พื้นฐาน because my aunt wanted the report on Monday. I’d spent two evenings searching for the mistake and I was getting nowhere, to be honestคำเชื่อมที่เป็นธรรมชาติ แสดงความหงุดหงิด. Then Ganzorig, who’s an accountant, came to the shop on Sunday, when it was closed. He sat down beside me and went through the list line by line, and within an hour he’d found that two deliveries had been entered twice, which made the total far too high. He also showed me a simple way to check the list every week, so it wouldn’t happen again. Afterwards I felt enormously relievedคำขยายและคำคุณศัพท์ที่แม่นยำ, and a little embarrassed because the mistake was so much simpleใช้คำขยายผิด ต้องเป็น “so simple”. It gave me a lot more confidenceวลีที่เป็นธรรมชาติสำหรับผลที่อยู่ยาว in my work, and I’m genuinely grateful to him. These days I check the list before I leave every Saturday, and my aunt hasn’t found a single error since.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my cousin’s husband, Ganzorig, who rescued me from a problem in my family’s shop last November. The shop, in Ulaanbaatar, sells school supplies, and I work there on Saturdays. My aunt owns it, and she had only recently started entrusting me with more responsibility, so I was determined to get it right. At the time I was responsible for the stock list on the computer, but the figures on the screen simply refused to match what was on the shelvesสำนวนที่เห็นภาพและเป็นธรรมชาติ พร้อม past tense ที่ถูกต้อง, and I couldn’t work out why. I was under real pressureคำที่มักใช้คู่กันอย่างแม่นยำ, since my aunt expected the report on Monday, and after two evenings of searching I was at a complete lossสำนวนที่ใช้บอกว่าไม่มีความคิดเลย. Then Ganzorig, an accountant, came to the shop on Sunday, when it was closed. He sat beside me, went through the list line by line, and within an hour had spotted that two deliveries had been entered twice, which inflated the totalใช้ past perfect และประโยคขยายความได้ถูกต้อง. He also talked me through a simple weekly checkวลีกริยาที่แม่นยำ so that it wouldn’t happen again. I felt enormously relieved, and slightly embarrassed that the cause was so simple, but what stayed with me more than anythingคำเชื่อมที่เป็นธรรมชาติ นำเข้าสู่การทบทวนความคิด was how patiently he explained it, without making me feel foolish. It was a weight off my mind, and it has made me far readier to ask for help early instead of struggling alone. These days I check the list before locking up every Saturday, and the weekly routine he suggested has not failed me once.