Describe something you saved money to buy

الدرجة 6

I’d like to describe an acoustic guitar that I saved money to buy two years ago. I live in Lagos, and I am wantingصيغة فعل خاطئة، والصواب «had wanted» أو «wanted» a guitar since I was fifteen, because my uncle played one every Sunday after church and I loved the sound. My family could not buy it for me, so I decided to save by myself. It takeخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «took» me about nine months. I worked on Saturdays in my cousin’s phone shop, and I also stopخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «stopped» buying snacks after class, which was, erحشو مستخدم أثناء البحث عن الفكرة التالية, quite hard because my friends always went to the cafe. Every month I put the money in a small tin box under my bed and I counted it again and again. In the sixth month my phone breakخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «broke» and I almost useخطأ في صيغة الفعل، والصواب «used» the money to fix it, but my uncle said I must wait. I wanted the guitar because music helps me relax after a long day, and also I wanted to play songs with the group from my church. When I finally had enough money, I went to a music shop near my university with my uncle, and he helped me choose a goodصفة بسيطة، وهذا يحدّ من درجة الثروة اللغوية one. I felt very, very happyأداة توكيد بسيطة مكررة بدلًا من كلمة دقيقة when I carried it home. I didn’t sleptخطأ في صيغة الفعل، والصواب «didn’t sleep» much that night because I playخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «played» until my mother told me to stop. I think saving for it was a good experienceعبارة مبهمة، وهذا يحدّ من درجة الثروة اللغوية, because now I take care itسقط حرف الجر، والصواب «take care of it» very carefully. Now I play it at church on Sundays, next to my uncle, and I am very proud when people listen.

الدرجة 7

I’d like to describe an acoustic guitar that I saved up for two years ago. I live in Lagos, and I’d wanted a guitar ever since I was fifteen, because my uncle played one every Sunday after church and I loved the sound. My family couldn’t afford to buy it for me, so I decided to put money asideمتلازمة لفظية طبيعية للتعبير عن الادخار myself, and it took me about nine months. I worked on Saturdays in my cousin’s phone shop, and I gave up buying snacks after class, which was harder than I expected because my friends always went to the cafeبنية مقارنة مع جملة سببية، مستخدمة بدقة. Every month I’d drop what I’d earned into a small tin box under my bed and count it again and again. In the sixth month my phone broke and I was tempted to spend the money on a new screen, but my uncle told me to hold on, so I did. I wanted the guitar because music helps me unwind after a long day, and I hoped to play along with the group from my church. When I finally had enough, I went to a music shop near my university with my uncle, who helped me pick out a really nice oneصفة عامة مأمونة، وكلمة أدق ترفع المدى. I felt incredibly proudكلمة أقوى وأدق للتعبير عن الشعور carrying it home. I hardly slept that night because I kept playing until my mother told to meخطأ في ترتيب الكلمات، والصواب «told me» to stop. Looking back, saving for it made me appreciate it more than if someone had simply handed it to meجملة تأملية تربط الجهد بالشعور, and I look after it very carefully, so it’s still in a perfect conditionخطأ في الأداة: عبارة «in perfect condition» لا تسبقها أداة. Now I play it at church on Sundays, right next to my uncle.

الدرجة 8

I’d like to describe an acoustic guitar that I saved up for two years ago. I live in Lagos, and I’d had my heart set on one ever since I was fifteen, when my uncle started playing his every Sunday after church. My family couldn’t afford to buy it for me, so I decided to put the money aside myself, and it took me about nine months. I worked on Saturdays in my cousin’s phone shop and went without snacks after class, which was harder than I’d expected, given that my friends were always at the cafeبنية مقارنة مع جملة تعليل، محكمة وطبيعية. Every month I’d drop what I’d earned into a small tin box under my bed and count it again, as if it might have multiplied overnight. In the sixth month my phone broke and I was sorely temptedمتلازمة لفظية دقيقة تُظهر صراعًا داخليًا حقيقيًا to spend the money on a new screen, but my uncle urged me to hold on, and I’m glad I did. I wanted the guitar because music helps me unwind after a long day, and I hoped to play along with the group from my church. When I finally had enough, I went to a music shop near my university with my uncle, who helped me pick out one with a warm, full soundوصف محدد بدلًا من صفة عامة. I was over the moonتعبير اصطلاحي عن فرح شديد carrying it home. I hardly slept that night because I kept playing until my mother had to come in and ask me to stopعبارة سردية طبيعية بالزمن الصحيح. Looking back, what I value most is not the guitar itself but the months it representsجملة تأكيد مشطورة تقدّم فكرة ختامية واضحة, which is probably why I still treat it with such care. Now I play it at church on Sundays, right next to my uncle, and being listened to feels like a reward I earnedعبارة موجزة وطبيعية تردد صدى فكرة الجهد.