Describe something you saved money to buy

Band 6

I’d like to describe an acoustic guitar that I saved money to buy two years ago. I live in Lagos, and I am wantingใช้รูปกริยาผิด ต้องเป็น “had wanted” หรือ “wanted” a guitar since I was fifteen, because my uncle played one every Sunday after church and I loved the sound. My family could not buy it for me, so I decided to save by myself. It takeใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “took” me about nine months. I worked on Saturdays in my cousin’s phone shop, and I also stopใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “stopped” buying snacks after class, which was, erคำเติมที่ใช้ระหว่างนึกหาความคิดถัดไป, quite hard because my friends always went to the cafe. Every month I put the money in a small tin box under my bed and I counted it again and again. In the sixth month my phone breakใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “broke” and I almost useใช้รูปกริยาผิด ต้องเป็น “used” the money to fix it, but my uncle said I must wait. I wanted the guitar because music helps me relax after a long day, and also I wanted to play songs with the group from my church. When I finally had enough money, I went to a music shop near my university with my uncle, and he helped me choose a goodคำคุณศัพท์พื้นฐาน จำกัดคะแนน Lexical Resource one. I felt very, very happyใช้คำเน้นพื้นฐานซ้ำแทนคำที่แม่นยำ when I carried it home. I didn’t sleptใช้รูปกริยาผิด ต้องเป็น “didn’t sleep” much that night because I playใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “played” until my mother told me to stop. I think saving for it was a good experienceวลีกว้างเกินไป จำกัดคะแนน Lexical Resource, because now I take care itขาดคำบุพบท ต้องเป็น “take care of it” very carefully. Now I play it at church on Sundays, next to my uncle, and I am very proud when people listen.

Band 7

I’d like to describe an acoustic guitar that I saved up for two years ago. I live in Lagos, and I’d wanted a guitar ever since I was fifteen, because my uncle played one every Sunday after church and I loved the sound. My family couldn’t afford to buy it for me, so I decided to put money asidecollocation ที่เป็นธรรมชาติสำหรับการเก็บเงิน myself, and it took me about nine months. I worked on Saturdays in my cousin’s phone shop, and I gave up buying snacks after class, which was harder than I expected because my friends always went to the cafeใช้การเปรียบเทียบพร้อมประโยคเหตุผลได้ถูกต้อง. Every month I’d drop what I’d earned into a small tin box under my bed and count it again and again. In the sixth month my phone broke and I was tempted to spend the money on a new screen, but my uncle told me to hold on, so I did. I wanted the guitar because music helps me unwind after a long day, and I hoped to play along with the group from my church. When I finally had enough, I went to a music shop near my university with my uncle, who helped me pick out a really nice oneคำคุณศัพท์ทั่วไปที่ปลอดภัย ถ้าใช้คำที่แม่นยำกว่าจะยกระดับความหลากหลาย. I felt incredibly proudคำแสดงความรู้สึกที่หนักแน่นและแม่นยำกว่า carrying it home. I hardly slept that night because I kept playing until my mother told to meลำดับคำผิด ต้องเป็น “told me” to stop. Looking back, saving for it made me appreciate it more than if someone had simply handed it to meประโยคที่มองย้อนกลับเชื่อมความพยายามกับความรู้สึก, and I look after it very carefully, so it’s still in a perfect conditionใช้คำนำหน้านามผิด “in perfect condition” ไม่ใช้ article. Now I play it at church on Sundays, right next to my uncle.

Band 8

I’d like to describe an acoustic guitar that I saved up for two years ago. I live in Lagos, and I’d had my heart set on one ever since I was fifteen, when my uncle started playing his every Sunday after church. My family couldn’t afford to buy it for me, so I decided to put the money aside myself, and it took me about nine months. I worked on Saturdays in my cousin’s phone shop and went without snacks after class, which was harder than I’d expected, given that my friends were always at the cafeการเปรียบเทียบพร้อม reason clause ควบคุมได้ดีและเป็นธรรมชาติ. Every month I’d drop what I’d earned into a small tin box under my bed and count it again, as if it might have multiplied overnight. In the sixth month my phone broke and I was sorely temptedcollocation ที่แม่นยำ แสดงการต่อสู้ในใจจริงๆ to spend the money on a new screen, but my uncle urged me to hold on, and I’m glad I did. I wanted the guitar because music helps me unwind after a long day, and I hoped to play along with the group from my church. When I finally had enough, I went to a music shop near my university with my uncle, who helped me pick out one with a warm, full soundบรรยายเฉพาะเจาะจงแทนคำคุณศัพท์ทั่วไป. I was over the moonสำนวนแสดงความดีใจอย่างมาก carrying it home. I hardly slept that night because I kept playing until my mother had to come in and ask me to stopวลีเล่าเรื่องที่เป็นธรรมชาติ ใช้ tense ถูกต้อง. Looking back, what I value most is not the guitar itself but the months it representscleft sentence ที่ให้ประเด็นปิดท้ายชัดเจน, which is probably why I still treat it with such care. Now I play it at church on Sundays, right next to my uncle, and being listened to feels like a reward I earnedวลีกระชับและเป็นธรรมชาติที่สะท้อนเรื่องความพยายาม.