Describe something you saved money to buy

Band 6

I’d like to describe an acoustic guitar that I saved money to buy two years ago. I live in Lagos, and I am wantingBentuk kata kerja yang salah: sepatutnya “had wanted” atau “wanted” a guitar since I was fifteen, because my uncle played one every Sunday after church and I loved the sound. My family could not buy it for me, so I decided to save by myself. It takeKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “took” me about nine months. I worked on Saturdays in my cousin’s phone shop, and I also stopKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “stopped” buying snacks after class, which was, erKata pengisi semasa mencari idea seterusnya, quite hard because my friends always went to the cafe. Every month I put the money in a small tin box under my bed and I counted it again and again. In the sixth month my phone breakKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “broke” and I almost useKesilapan bentuk kata kerja: sepatutnya “used” the money to fix it, but my uncle said I must wait. I wanted the guitar because music helps me relax after a long day, and also I wanted to play songs with the group from my church. When I finally had enough money, I went to a music shop near my university with my uncle, and he helped me choose a goodKata adjektif asas; menghadkan Lexical Resource one. I felt very, very happyPenguat asas yang diulang dan bukannya perkataan yang tepat when I carried it home. I didn’t sleptKesilapan bentuk kata kerja: sepatutnya “didn’t sleep” much that night because I playKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “played” until my mother told me to stop. I think saving for it was a good experienceFrasa kabur; menghadkan Lexical Resource, because now I take care itKata sendi nama tertinggal: sepatutnya “take care of it” very carefully. Now I play it at church on Sundays, next to my uncle, and I am very proud when people listen.

Band 7

I’d like to describe an acoustic guitar that I saved up for two years ago. I live in Lagos, and I’d wanted a guitar ever since I was fifteen, because my uncle played one every Sunday after church and I loved the sound. My family couldn’t afford to buy it for me, so I decided to put money asideKolokasi yang semula jadi untuk menabung myself, and it took me about nine months. I worked on Saturdays in my cousin’s phone shop, and I gave up buying snacks after class, which was harder than I expected because my friends always went to the cafePerbandingan dengan klausa sebab digunakan dengan tepat. Every month I’d drop what I’d earned into a small tin box under my bed and count it again and again. In the sixth month my phone broke and I was tempted to spend the money on a new screen, but my uncle told me to hold on, so I did. I wanted the guitar because music helps me unwind after a long day, and I hoped to play along with the group from my church. When I finally had enough, I went to a music shop near my university with my uncle, who helped me pick out a really nice oneKata adjektif umum yang selamat; perkataan yang lebih tepat akan meningkatkan kepelbagaian. I felt incredibly proudPerkataan perasaan yang lebih kuat dan tepat carrying it home. I hardly slept that night because I kept playing until my mother told to meKesilapan susunan perkataan: sepatutnya “told me” to stop. Looking back, saving for it made me appreciate it more than if someone had simply handed it to meKlausa renungan yang menghubungkan usaha dengan perasaan, and I look after it very carefully, so it’s still in a perfect conditionKesilapan artikel: “in perfect condition” tidak memerlukan artikel. Now I play it at church on Sundays, right next to my uncle.

Band 8

I’d like to describe an acoustic guitar that I saved up for two years ago. I live in Lagos, and I’d had my heart set on one ever since I was fifteen, when my uncle started playing his every Sunday after church. My family couldn’t afford to buy it for me, so I decided to put the money aside myself, and it took me about nine months. I worked on Saturdays in my cousin’s phone shop and went without snacks after class, which was harder than I’d expected, given that my friends were always at the cafePerbandingan dengan klausa sebab, terkawal dan semula jadi. Every month I’d drop what I’d earned into a small tin box under my bed and count it again, as if it might have multiplied overnight. In the sixth month my phone broke and I was sorely temptedKolokasi yang tepat yang menunjukkan pergelutan dalaman yang nyata to spend the money on a new screen, but my uncle urged me to hold on, and I’m glad I did. I wanted the guitar because music helps me unwind after a long day, and I hoped to play along with the group from my church. When I finally had enough, I went to a music shop near my university with my uncle, who helped me pick out one with a warm, full soundHuraian khusus dan bukannya kata adjektif umum. I was over the moonUngkapan idiomatik bagi kegembiraan yang kuat carrying it home. I hardly slept that night because I kept playing until my mother had to come in and ask me to stopFrasa naratif yang semula jadi dengan tense yang betul. Looking back, what I value most is not the guitar itself but the months it representsCleft sentence yang memberi kesimpulan akhir yang jelas, which is probably why I still treat it with such care. Now I play it at church on Sundays, right next to my uncle, and being listened to feels like a reward I earnedFrasa ringkas dan semula jadi yang menggemakan tema usaha.