Describe something you saved money to buy

Band 6

I’d like to describe an acoustic guitar that I saved money to buy two years ago. I live in Lagos, and I am wantingFel forması səhvi: «had wanted» və ya «wanted» olmalıdır a guitar since I was fifteen, because my uncle played one every Sunday after church and I loved the sound. My family could not buy it for me, so I decided to save by myself. It takeZaman səhvi: «took» olmalıdır me about nine months. I worked on Saturdays in my cousin’s phone shop, and I also stopZaman səhvi: «stopped» olmalıdır buying snacks after class, which was, erNövbəti fikri axtararkən işlədilən doldurucu, quite hard because my friends always went to the cafe. Every month I put the money in a small tin box under my bed and I counted it again and again. In the sixth month my phone breakZaman səhvi: «broke» olmalıdır and I almost useForma səhvi: «used» olmalıdır the money to fix it, but my uncle said I must wait. I wanted the guitar because music helps me relax after a long day, and also I wanted to play songs with the group from my church. When I finally had enough money, I went to a music shop near my university with my uncle, and he helped me choose a goodSadə sifət; Lexical Resource-u məhdudlaşdırır one. I felt very, very happyDəqiq söz əvəzinə təkrarlanan sadə gücləndirici when I carried it home. I didn’t sleptForma səhvi: «didn’t sleep» olmalıdır much that night because I playZaman səhvi: «played» olmalıdır until my mother told me to stop. I think saving for it was a good experienceQeyri-müəyyən ifadə; Lexical Resource-u məhdudlaşdırır, because now I take care itSözönü çatışmır: «take care of it» olmalıdır very carefully. Now I play it at church on Sundays, next to my uncle, and I am very proud when people listen.

Band 7

I’d like to describe an acoustic guitar that I saved up for two years ago. I live in Lagos, and I’d wanted a guitar ever since I was fifteen, because my uncle played one every Sunday after church and I loved the sound. My family couldn’t afford to buy it for me, so I decided to put money asidePul yığmaq üçün təbii collocation myself, and it took me about nine months. I worked on Saturdays in my cousin’s phone shop, and I gave up buying snacks after class, which was harder than I expected because my friends always went to the cafeSəbəb budağı ilə müqayisə düzgün işlədilib. Every month I’d drop what I’d earned into a small tin box under my bed and count it again and again. In the sixth month my phone broke and I was tempted to spend the money on a new screen, but my uncle told me to hold on, so I did. I wanted the guitar because music helps me unwind after a long day, and I hoped to play along with the group from my church. When I finally had enough, I went to a music shop near my university with my uncle, who helped me pick out a really nice oneSadə, ümumi sifət; daha dəqiq söz çeşidi artırardı. I felt incredibly proudDaha güclü, daha dəqiq hiss ifadəsi carrying it home. I hardly slept that night because I kept playing until my mother told to meSöz sırası səhvi: «told me» olmalıdır to stop. Looking back, saving for it made me appreciate it more than if someone had simply handed it to meDüşüncəli budaq cümləsi zəhməti hissə bağlayır, and I look after it very carefully, so it’s still in a perfect conditionArtikl səhvi: «in perfect condition» artikl tələb etmir. Now I play it at church on Sundays, right next to my uncle.

Band 8

I’d like to describe an acoustic guitar that I saved up for two years ago. I live in Lagos, and I’d had my heart set on one ever since I was fifteen, when my uncle started playing his every Sunday after church. My family couldn’t afford to buy it for me, so I decided to put the money aside myself, and it took me about nine months. I worked on Saturdays in my cousin’s phone shop and went without snacks after class, which was harder than I’d expected, given that my friends were always at the cafeSəbəb budaq cümləsi ilə müqayisə, nəzarətli və təbii. Every month I’d drop what I’d earned into a small tin box under my bed and count it again, as if it might have multiplied overnight. In the sixth month my phone broke and I was sorely temptedDaxili mübarizəni göstərən dəqiq collocation to spend the money on a new screen, but my uncle urged me to hold on, and I’m glad I did. I wanted the guitar because music helps me unwind after a long day, and I hoped to play along with the group from my church. When I finally had enough, I went to a music shop near my university with my uncle, who helped me pick out one with a warm, full soundÜmumi sifət əvəzinə konkret təsvir. I was over the moonGüclü sevincin idiomatik ifadəsi carrying it home. I hardly slept that night because I kept playing until my mother had to come in and ask me to stopDüzgün zamanla təbii təhkiyə ifadəsi. Looking back, what I value most is not the guitar itself but the months it representsAydın yekun fikir verən cleft sentence, which is probably why I still treat it with such care. Now I play it at church on Sundays, right next to my uncle, and being listened to feels like a reward I earnedZəhmət mövzusunu əks etdirən yığcam, təbii ifadə.