Describe an interesting video you watched

Band 6

I would like to talk about an interesting video that I see時態錯誤：應為「saw」 last month. It was a short documentary, about twelve minutes, about the stilt fishermen on the south coast of Sri Lanka, near Galle. I watched it on my laptop at home in Colombo on a rainy Sunday afternoon. My cousin Shehan send時態錯誤：應為「sent」 me the link because he knew that I was, er猶豫時使用的填充詞, always interested in our local culture. I watched it because I had seen those men on postcards and photos many times, but I never knew how they really live. In the video, a man called Sunil explains that he sits on a wooden pole in the sea for many hours and waits for small fish, and his father and grandfather do時態錯誤：應為「did」 the same. The camera also followed him when he climbed onto the pole before the sunrise and kept his balance with one hand, which looked impossible to me. The pictures of the sunrise and the water were very beautiful基本說法，限制了Lexical Resource的分數, and I watched without touching my phone. Sunil also says that less young men可數名詞用法錯誤：應為「fewer young men」 want to learn this work because it is difficult and uncertain. About my feelings, I feel proud because it is a nice tradition說法含糊，限制了Lexical Resource的分數 of my country, but I also feel a little sad because it may disappear one day. After the video I show時態錯誤：應為「showed」 it to my parents, and we talked about it all evening. You know當作停頓使用的填充詞, now I look at fishermen in a different way.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about an interesting video I watched last month. It was a short documentary, about twelve minutes long, on the stilt fishermen of the south coast of Sri Lanka, near Galle. I watched it on my laptop at home in Colombo on a rainy Sunday afternoon. My cousin Shehan had sent me the link because he knew I’m always curious about our local culture. I decided to watch it because I’d seen those men on postcards and photos many times, but I’d never understood how they actually live. In the video, a man called Sunil explains that he sits on a wooden pole in the sea for hours, waiting for small fish, and that his father and grandfather did exactly the same. The camera also followed him as he climbed onto the pole before dawn and balanced there with one hand, which looked almost impossible to me. The footage of the sunrise over the water was breathtaking精準、自然地描述畫面, and I didn’t touched詞形錯誤：應為「didn’t touch」 my phone once. Sunil also says that fewer young men want to learn this work because it’s difficult and uncertain. As for how I feel, I’m proud of it as part of our heritage, but at the same time a little sad轉折用語讓感受保持平衡, because it may disappear. Afterwards I showed it to my parents and we talked about it all evening. It has honestly changed the way I look at自然的說法，顯示看法有了改變 the fishermen in the coast介系詞錯誤：應為「on the coast」.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about an interesting video I watched last month: a short documentary, about twelve minutes long, on the stilt fishermen of the south coast of Sri Lanka, near Galle. I watched it on my laptop at home in Colombo on a rainy Sunday afternoon. My cousin Shehan had sent me the link because he knew I’m always curious about our local culture. I decided to watch it because I’d seen those men on postcards and photos many times, but I’d never understood how they actually live. In the video, a man called Sunil explains that he sits on a wooden pole in the sea for hours, waiting for small fish, and that his father and grandfather did exactly the same. The camera also followed him as he climbed onto the pole before dawn and balanced there with one hand, which looked almost impossible to me. The footage of the sunrise over the water was breathtaking, and I was glued to the screen慣用說法，表示全神貫注 from start to finish. Sunil also says that fewer young men want to learn this work because it’s difficult and uncertain. As for how I feel, I’m proud of it as part of our heritage, yet I can’t help feeling a little sad that it may disappear正確使用讓步的「yet」和「can’t help」. Afterwards I showed it to my parents and we talked about it all evening. Honestly簡短的話語標記，表示接下來是真誠的看法, it has left a lasting impression on me精準、自然的詞語搭配, and I now look at those fishermen with far more respect.