Describe a person who loves history

Band 6

I would like to describe my grandfather Tomasz, who liveLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “lives” in Krakow in Poland. He is a retired railway engineer, but his real passion is history, and he has been interested in it since he was a boy. He learns about it in many ways. At home he haveLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “has” a whole shelf of books about kings, wars and ordinary people, and in the evening he watches documentaries on television. At the weekend he often goes to castles and museums, and he writes new facts in a small notebook, you knowCụm từ đệm dùng để ngập ngừng, like a student. Once he spendLỗi thì: phải là “spent” a whole month reading about the railway in our region, because he wanted to know who planned it and how the workers lived. He also likes to talk to old neighbours because they remember many thingsCách diễn đạt cơ bản; một cụm động từ chính xác hơn như “recall how life used to be” sẽ được điểm cao hơn from the past. I think he loves history because he wants to understand why the city and the country isLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “are” like they are today. He says that ordinary people’s stories are more interestingCấp so sánh cơ bản; một tính từ mạnh hơn như “more moving” sẽ được điểm cao hơn than the names of kings. When we have lunch together, he often asks me what we learn at school, and he corrects me if I say wrong dateThiếu mạo từ và chọn từ chưa đúng: phải là “give the wrong date”. Last summer he takeLỗi thì: phải là “took” me to Wawel Castle, and I was surprised because he explained everything in a very nice wayCụm từ mơ hồ, cơ bản, hạn chế Lexical Resource, erTừ ngập ngừng tự nhiên, từ đệm không đáng kể, so the place felt alive. I admire him a lot, and now I also want to learn more about the past.

Band 7

I’d like to describe my grandfather Tomasz, who lives in Krakow in Poland. He’s a retired railway engineer, but his real passion is history, and he’s been interested in it since he was a boy. He learns about it in several ways. At home he has a whole shelf of books about kings, wars and ordinary people, and in the evenings he watches documentaries. At weekends he often goes to castles and museums, and he writes new facts in a small notebook, like a student preparing for an examPhép so sánh tự nhiên làm câu thêm sinh động. Once he spent a whole month reading about the railway built in our region, because he wanted to know who had planned it and how the workers lived. He also likes to talk to old neighbours because they remember things that never appear in books. I think he loves history because he wants to understand why the city and the country isLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “are” the way they are today. He says that the stories of ordinary people are far more movingTính từ mạnh hơn “interesting” than the names of kings. When we have lunch together, he often asks what we’ve been learning at school, and he corrects me gently if I get a date wrong. Last summer he took me to Wawel Castle, and I was surprised because he explained everything so vividly that the place felt as if it were aliveSo sánh phi thực tế với “were” ở thức giả định, dùng đúng. I admire him a great deal, and to be honestDiscourse marker tự nhiên dẫn vào một nhận xét cá nhân, I now want to learn more about the past too.

Band 8

I’d like to describe my grandfather Tomasz, who lives in Krakow in Poland. He’s a retired railway engineer, but his real passion is history, which has fascinated him since he was a boy. He learns about it in several ways. At home he has a whole shelf of books about kings, wars and ordinary people, and in the evenings he watches documentaries. At weekends he often visits castles and museums, jotting new facts down in a small notebook like a student preparing for an examPhép so sánh tự nhiên làm câu thêm sinh động. Once he spent a whole month researching the railway built in our region, wanting to know who had planned it and how the workers had lived. He also loves talking to old neighbours, who remember things that never made it into books. I think he loves history because he wants to understand why the city and the country are the way they are today, and he says that the stories of ordinary people are far more moving than the names of kingsPhép so sánh song song được diễn đạt cân đối và chặt chẽ. When we have lunch together he asks what we’ve been studying at school, and he corrects me gently whenever I get a date wrong, which happens more often than I’d like to admit. Last summer he took me to Wawel Castle, and what surprised me was how vividly he explained everything: the place came to lifeCụm động từ mang tính thành ngữ, dùng chính xác in a way no guidebook could manage. I admire him enormously, and if I’m honestDiscourse marker tự nhiên dẫn vào một nhận xét cá nhân, he has made me curious about a subject that bored me at school.