Describe a sports person you admire

Band 6

I would like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She is a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and she is not famous in the whole world, but many people here know her. She winKesalahan bentuk kata kerja: seharusnya “has won” the regional championship several times, and she also goKesalahan sesaat pada tenses: seharusnya “went” abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I, erPenanda jeda alami, kata pengisi yang ringan, saw her on the local news and I followKesalahan sesaat pada tenses: seharusnya “followed” her videos online. The most important thing for me is what happened after her knee injury. She could not run for many months and she was almost ready to stop, but she didn’t gave upKesalahan kata kerja bantu: seharusnya “didn’t give up”. She did slow exercises in the pool, and in the end she came back and won againKosakata dasar; membatasi Lexical Resource. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loud that my mother came to my room. I admire her because she is very hard-workingKosakata dasar; membatasi Lexical Resource, and she haveKesalahan kesesuaian subjek dan kata kerja: seharusnya “has” a good heart too. You knowFrasa pengisi yang dipakai sebagai penanda ragu, now she helps children in a small club at weekends, and she is always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failure is not the end, and I want to be like her when I have difficulties in my life.

Band 7

I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t famous worldwide, many people here know her. She’s won the regional championship several times, and she’s also gone abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she visited my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I saw her on the local news and followed her videos onlineKolokasi yang alami untuk mengikuti seorang atlet. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for many months and she was close to giving up altogetherGerund setelah kata depan dipakai dengan akurat, but she did slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than beforeFrasa komparatif yang alami. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. I admire her because she’s so dedicatedKata sifat yang tepat and, what’s moreFrasa penghubung menambah satu poin dengan alami, she’s kind personKata sandang hilang: seharusnya “a kind person”. These days she helps children at a local club at weekends, and she’s always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failing at something isn’t the end of the roadSubjek gerund dengan idiom yang alami, and I’d like to be like her when I face difficulties.

Band 8

I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t a household name abroad, she’s very well known here. She’s won the regional championship several times and has also gone overseas to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk, where she told us that she trains at five every morning before her work as a teacher. I’ve kept up with her careerPhrasal verb idiomatis yang dipakai dengan alami through the local news and her online videos ever since. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for months and was close to giving up altogetherGerund yang akurat setelah kata depan, yet she switched to slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than everRumusan idiomatis yang alami. I admire her not only for the results but for her quiet dedicationKolokasi yang tepat and her generosity: these days she gives up her weekends to coach children at a local clubPresent simple untuk kebiasaan, dengan urutan kata yang alami, always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. In my view she shows young people that setbacks are a part of the process rather than the end of it, and when I face difficulties of my own, I try to remember her.