Describe a sports person you admire

Band 6

I would like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She is a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and she is not famous in the whole world, but many people here know her. She winใช้รูปกริยาผิด ต้องเป็น “has won” the regional championship several times, and she also goใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “went” abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I, erหยุดคิดอย่างเป็นธรรมชาติ คำเติมไม่รบกวน, saw her on the local news and I followใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “followed” her videos online. The most important thing for me is what happened after her knee injury. She could not run for many months and she was almost ready to stop, but she didn’t gave upใช้กริยาช่วยผิด ต้องเป็น “didn’t give up”. She did slow exercises in the pool, and in the end she came back and won againคำศัพท์พื้นฐาน จำกัดคะแนน Lexical Resource. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loud that my mother came to my room. I admire her because she is very hard-workingคำศัพท์พื้นฐาน จำกัดคะแนน Lexical Resource, and she haveประธานกับกริยาไม่สอดคล้องกัน ต้องเป็น “has” a good heart too. You knowใช้วลีเติมเป็นตัวหยุดคิด, now she helps children in a small club at weekends, and she is always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failure is not the end, and I want to be like her when I have difficulties in my life.

Band 7

I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t famous worldwide, many people here know her. She’s won the regional championship several times, and she’s also gone abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she visited my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I saw her on the local news and followed her videos onlinecollocation ที่เป็นธรรมชาติสำหรับการติดตามนักกีฬา. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for many months and she was close to giving up altogetherใช้ gerund หลังคำบุพบทได้ถูกต้อง, but she did slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than beforeวลีเปรียบเทียบที่เป็นธรรมชาติ. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. I admire her because she’s so dedicatedคำคุณศัพท์ที่แม่นยำ and, what’s moreวลีเชื่อมเพิ่มประเด็นได้เป็นธรรมชาติ, she’s kind personขาดคำนำหน้านาม ต้องเป็น “a kind person”. These days she helps children at a local club at weekends, and she’s always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failing at something isn’t the end of the roadgerund เป็นประธานพร้อมสำนวนที่เป็นธรรมชาติ, and I’d like to be like her when I face difficulties.

Band 8

I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t a household name abroad, she’s very well known here. She’s won the regional championship several times and has also gone overseas to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk, where she told us that she trains at five every morning before her work as a teacher. I’ve kept up with her careerphrasal verb แบบสำนวนที่ใช้ได้เป็นธรรมชาติ through the local news and her online videos ever since. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for months and was close to giving up altogethergerund หลังคำบุพบทที่ถูกต้อง, yet she switched to slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than everถ้อยคำแบบสำนวนที่เป็นธรรมชาติ. I admire her not only for the results but for her quiet dedicationcollocation ที่แม่นยำ and her generosity: these days she gives up her weekends to coach children at a local clubใช้ present simple กับสิ่งที่ทำเป็นประจำ ลำดับคำเป็นธรรมชาติ, always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. In my view she shows young people that setbacks are a part of the process rather than the end of it, and when I face difficulties of my own, I try to remember her.