Describe a sports person you admire

Band 6

I would like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She is a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and she is not famous in the whole world, but many people here know her. She winLỗi dạng động từ: phải là “has won” the regional championship several times, and she also goLỗi thì: phải là “went” abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I, erTừ ngập ngừng tự nhiên, từ đệm không đáng kể, saw her on the local news and I followLỗi thì: phải là “followed” her videos online. The most important thing for me is what happened after her knee injury. She could not run for many months and she was almost ready to stop, but she didn’t gave upLỗi trợ động từ: phải là “didn’t give up”. She did slow exercises in the pool, and in the end she came back and won againTừ vựng cơ bản, hạn chế Lexical Resource. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loud that my mother came to my room. I admire her because she is very hard-workingTừ vựng cơ bản, hạn chế Lexical Resource, and she haveLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “has” a good heart too. You knowCụm từ đệm dùng để ngập ngừng, now she helps children in a small club at weekends, and she is always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failure is not the end, and I want to be like her when I have difficulties in my life.

Band 7

I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t famous worldwide, many people here know her. She’s won the regional championship several times, and she’s also gone abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she visited my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I saw her on the local news and followed her videos onlineCollocation tự nhiên khi nói về việc theo dõi một vận động viên. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for many months and she was close to giving up altogetherDanh động từ sau giới từ, dùng chính xác, but she did slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than beforeCụm so sánh tự nhiên. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. I admire her because she’s so dedicatedTính từ chính xác and, what’s moreCụm nối giúp thêm ý một cách tự nhiên, she’s kind personThiếu mạo từ: phải là “a kind person”. These days she helps children at a local club at weekends, and she’s always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failing at something isn’t the end of the roadDanh động từ làm chủ ngữ kèm một thành ngữ tự nhiên, and I’d like to be like her when I face difficulties.

Band 8

I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t a household name abroad, she’s very well known here. She’s won the regional championship several times and has also gone overseas to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk, where she told us that she trains at five every morning before her work as a teacher. I’ve kept up with her careerCụm động từ mang tính thành ngữ, dùng tự nhiên through the local news and her online videos ever since. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for months and was close to giving up altogetherDanh động từ sau giới từ, dùng chính xác, yet she switched to slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than everCách diễn đạt tự nhiên, mang tính thành ngữ. I admire her not only for the results but for her quiet dedicationCollocation chính xác and her generosity: these days she gives up her weekends to coach children at a local clubThì hiện tại đơn cho một thói quen, trật tự từ tự nhiên, always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. In my view she shows young people that setbacks are a part of the process rather than the end of it, and when I face difficulties of my own, I try to remember her.