Describe a sports person you admire

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I would like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She is a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and she is not famous in the whole world, but many people here know her. She winFiil biçimi hatası: “has won” olmalı the regional championship several times, and she also goZaman hatası: “went” olmalı abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I, erDoğal duraksama, önemsiz dolgu sözcüğü, saw her on the local news and I followZaman hatası: “followed” olmalı her videos online. The most important thing for me is what happened after her knee injury. She could not run for many months and she was almost ready to stop, but she didn’t gave upYardımcı fiil hatası: “didn’t give up” olmalı. She did slow exercises in the pool, and in the end she came back and won againBasit kelime; Lexical Resource puanını sınırlıyor. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loud that my mother came to my room. I admire her because she is very hard-workingBasit kelime; Lexical Resource puanını sınırlıyor, and she haveÖzne-yüklem uyumu hatası: “has” olmalı a good heart too. You knowDuraksama işareti olarak kullanılan dolgu ifadesi, now she helps children in a small club at weekends, and she is always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failure is not the end, and I want to be like her when I have difficulties in my life.

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I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t famous worldwide, many people here know her. She’s won the regional championship several times, and she’s also gone abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she visited my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I saw her on the local news and followed her videos onlineBir sporcuyu takip etmek için doğal collocation. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for many months and she was close to giving up altogetherEdattan sonra gerund doğru kullanılmış, but she did slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than beforeDoğal karşılaştırma ifadesi. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. I admire her because she’s so dedicatedİsabetli sıfat and, what’s moreBağlayıcı ifade bir noktayı doğal biçimde ekliyor, she’s kind personEksik article: “a kind person” olmalı. These days she helps children at a local club at weekends, and she’s always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failing at something isn’t the end of the roadÖzne olarak gerund ve doğal bir deyim, and I’d like to be like her when I face difficulties.

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I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t a household name abroad, she’s very well known here. She’s won the regional championship several times and has also gone overseas to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk, where she told us that she trains at five every morning before her work as a teacher. I’ve kept up with her careerDoğal kullanılmış deyimsel phrasal verb through the local news and her online videos ever since. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for months and was close to giving up altogetherEdattan sonra doğru gerund, yet she switched to slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than everDoğal, deyimsel anlatım. I admire her not only for the results but for her quiet dedicationİsabetli collocation and her generosity: these days she gives up her weekends to coach children at a local clubAlışkanlık için Present Simple, doğal kelime sırasıyla, always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. In my view she shows young people that setbacks are a part of the process rather than the end of it, and when I face difficulties of my own, I try to remember her.