Describe a sports person you admire

Band 6

I would like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She is a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and she is not famous in the whole world, but many people here know her. She win동사 형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “has won” the regional championship several times, and she also go시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “went” abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I, er자연스러운 머뭇거림 표지, 가벼운 군말, saw her on the local news and I follow시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “followed” her videos online. The most important thing for me is what happened after her knee injury. She could not run for many months and she was almost ready to stop, but she didn’t gave up조동사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “didn’t give up”. She did slow exercises in the pool, and in the end she came back and won again기본적인 어휘, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loud that my mother came to my room. I admire her because she is very hard-working기본적인 어휘, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함, and she have주어와 동사의 수 일치 오류: 올바른 형태는 “has” a good heart too. You know머뭇거림을 나타내는 군말 표현, now she helps children in a small club at weekends, and she is always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failure is not the end, and I want to be like her when I have difficulties in my life.

Band 7

I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t famous worldwide, many people here know her. She’s won the regional championship several times, and she’s also gone abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she visited my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I saw her on the local news and followed her videos online운동선수의 소식을 챙겨 본다는 뜻의 자연스러운 콜로케이션. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for many months and she was close to giving up altogether전치사 뒤의 동명사를 정확하게 사용, but she did slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than before자연스러운 비교급 표현. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. I admire her because she’s so dedicated정확한 형용사 and, what’s more연결 표현이 자연스럽게 요점을 더함, she’s kind person관사 누락: 올바른 형태는 “a kind person”. These days she helps children at a local club at weekends, and she’s always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failing at something isn’t the end of the road동명사 주어와 자연스러운 관용 표현, and I’d like to be like her when I face difficulties.

Band 8

I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t a household name abroad, she’s very well known here. She’s won the regional championship several times and has also gone overseas to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk, where she told us that she trains at five every morning before her work as a teacher. I’ve kept up with her career자연스럽게 쓴 관용적인 구동사 through the local news and her online videos ever since. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for months and was close to giving up altogether전치사 뒤의 동명사를 정확하게 사용, yet she switched to slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than ever자연스럽고 관용적인 표현. I admire her not only for the results but for her quiet dedication정확한 콜로케이션 and her generosity: these days she gives up her weekends to coach children at a local club습관을 나타내는 현재 시제와 자연스러운 어순, always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. In my view she shows young people that setbacks are a part of the process rather than the end of it, and when I face difficulties of my own, I try to remember her.