Describe a sports person you admire

Band 6

I would like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She is a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and she is not famous in the whole world, but many people here know her. She win動詞の形の誤り：正しくは「has won」 the regional championship several times, and she also go時制の誤り：正しくは「went」 abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I, er自然な間、気にならないつなぎ言葉, saw her on the local news and I follow時制の誤り：正しくは「followed」 her videos online. The most important thing for me is what happened after her knee injury. She could not run for many months and she was almost ready to stop, but she didn’t gave up助動詞の誤り：正しくは「didn’t give up」. She did slow exercises in the pool, and in the end she came back and won again基本的な語彙で、Lexical Resourceの評価が伸びない. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loud that my mother came to my room. I admire her because she is very hard-working基本的な語彙で、Lexical Resourceの評価が伸びない, and she have主語と動詞の不一致：正しくは「has」 a good heart too. You know間を埋めるつなぎ言葉として使っている, now she helps children in a small club at weekends, and she is always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failure is not the end, and I want to be like her when I have difficulties in my life.

Band 7

I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t famous worldwide, many people here know her. She’s won the regional championship several times, and she’s also gone abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she visited my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I saw her on the local news and followed her videos onlineアスリートを追いかけるときの、自然なコロケーション. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for many months and she was close to giving up altogether前置詞のあとの動名詞を、正確に使っている, but she did slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than before自然な比較表現. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. I admire her because she’s so dedicated的確な形容詞 and, what’s more話の流れを保ちながら、自然に論点を加える表現, she’s kind person冠詞の抜け：正しくは「a kind person」. These days she helps children at a local club at weekends, and she’s always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failing at something isn’t the end of the road動名詞を主語にした、自然な慣用表現, and I’d like to be like her when I face difficulties.

Band 8

I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t a household name abroad, she’s very well known here. She’s won the regional championship several times and has also gone overseas to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk, where she told us that she trains at five every morning before her work as a teacher. I’ve kept up with her career自然に使われた、慣用的な句動詞 through the local news and her online videos ever since. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for months and was close to giving up altogether前置詞のあとの動名詞を、正確に使っている, yet she switched to slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than ever自然で慣用的な言い回し. I admire her not only for the results but for her quiet dedication的確なコロケーション and her generosity: these days she gives up her weekends to coach children at a local club習慣を表す現在形を、自然な語順で正確に使っている, always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. In my view she shows young people that setbacks are a part of the process rather than the end of it, and when I face difficulties of my own, I try to remember her.