Describe a sports person you admire

Band 6

I would like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She is a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and she is not famous in the whole world, but many people here know her. She winKesilapan bentuk kata kerja: sepatutnya “has won” the regional championship several times, and she also goKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “went” abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I, erPenanda teragak-agak yang semula jadi, kata pengisi yang kecil, saw her on the local news and I followKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “followed” her videos online. The most important thing for me is what happened after her knee injury. She could not run for many months and she was almost ready to stop, but she didn’t gave upKesilapan kata kerja bantu: sepatutnya “didn’t give up”. She did slow exercises in the pool, and in the end she came back and won againKosa kata asas; menghadkan Lexical Resource. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loud that my mother came to my room. I admire her because she is very hard-workingKosa kata asas; menghadkan Lexical Resource, and she haveKesilapan persetujuan subjek dan kata kerja: sepatutnya “has” a good heart too. You knowFrasa pengisi yang digunakan sebagai penanda teragak-agak, now she helps children in a small club at weekends, and she is always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failure is not the end, and I want to be like her when I have difficulties in my life.

Band 7

I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t famous worldwide, many people here know her. She’s won the regional championship several times, and she’s also gone abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she visited my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I saw her on the local news and followed her videos onlineKolokasi yang semula jadi untuk mengikuti perkembangan seorang atlet. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for many months and she was close to giving up altogetherGerund selepas kata sendi nama digunakan dengan tepat, but she did slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than beforeFrasa perbandingan yang semula jadi. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. I admire her because she’s so dedicatedKata adjektif yang tepat and, what’s moreFrasa penghubung yang menambah satu perkara dengan semula jadi, she’s kind personArtikel tertinggal: sepatutnya “a kind person”. These days she helps children at a local club at weekends, and she’s always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failing at something isn’t the end of the roadGerund sebagai subjek dengan idiom yang semula jadi, and I’d like to be like her when I face difficulties.

Band 8

I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t a household name abroad, she’s very well known here. She’s won the regional championship several times and has also gone overseas to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk, where she told us that she trains at five every morning before her work as a teacher. I’ve kept up with her careerPhrasal verb idiomatik yang digunakan dengan semula jadi through the local news and her online videos ever since. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for months and was close to giving up altogetherGerund selepas kata sendi nama yang tepat, yet she switched to slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than everFrasa idiomatik yang semula jadi. I admire her not only for the results but for her quiet dedicationKolokasi yang tepat and her generosity: these days she gives up her weekends to coach children at a local clubPresent simple bagi kebiasaan, dengan susunan perkataan yang semula jadi, always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. In my view she shows young people that setbacks are a part of the process rather than the end of it, and when I face difficulties of my own, I try to remember her.