Describe a sports person you admire

Band 6

I would like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She is a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and she is not famous in the whole world, but many people here know her. She winЕтістік формасының қатесі: «has won» болуы керек the regional championship several times, and she also goШақ қатесі: «went» болуы керек abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I, erТабиғи кідіріс белгісі, елеусіз толтырғыш сөз, saw her on the local news and I followШақ қатесі: «followed» болуы керек her videos online. The most important thing for me is what happened after her knee injury. She could not run for many months and she was almost ready to stop, but she didn’t gave upКөмекші етістік қатесі: «didn’t give up» болуы керек. She did slow exercises in the pool, and in the end she came back and won againҚарапайым сөздік қор; Lexical Resource критерийін шектейді. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loud that my mother came to my room. I admire her because she is very hard-workingҚарапайым сөздік қор; Lexical Resource критерийін шектейді, and she haveБастауыш пен баяндауыштың қиыспауы: «has» болуы керек a good heart too. You knowКідіріс белгісі ретінде қолданылған толтырғыш тіркес, now she helps children in a small club at weekends, and she is always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failure is not the end, and I want to be like her when I have difficulties in my life.

Band 7

I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t famous worldwide, many people here know her. She’s won the regional championship several times, and she’s also gone abroad to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she visited my school to give a talk. She told us that she trains at five in the morning before her work as a teacher, and everybody in the hall was surprised. After that I saw her on the local news and followed her videos onlineСпортшыны қадағалауды білдіретін табиғи коллокация. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for many months and she was close to giving up altogetherПредлогтан кейінгі герундий дұрыс қолданылған, but she did slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than beforeТабиғи салыстырмалы тіркес. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. I admire her because she’s so dedicatedДәл сын есім and, what’s moreБайланыстырушы тіркес ойды табиғи қосады, she’s kind personАртикль жетіспейді: «a kind person» болуы керек. These days she helps children at a local club at weekends, and she’s always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. I think she shows young people that failing at something isn’t the end of the roadГерундийлі бастауыш табиғи идиомамен қолданылған, and I’d like to be like her when I face difficulties.

Band 8

I’d like to describe a sports person I admire, a woman called Tran Mai. She’s a long-distance runner from my city, Da Nang, and although she isn’t a household name abroad, she’s very well known here. She’s won the regional championship several times and has also gone overseas to run for our country. I first heard about her when I was fifteen, because she came to my school to give a talk, where she told us that she trains at five every morning before her work as a teacher. I’ve kept up with her careerТабиғи қолданылған идиомалық phrasal verb through the local news and her online videos ever since. What I admire most is how she handled her knee injury. She couldn’t run for months and was close to giving up altogetherПредлогтан кейінгі герундий дұрыс қолданылған, yet she switched to slow exercises in the pool and eventually came back stronger than everТабиғи, идиомалық тіркес. I admire her not only for the results but for her quiet dedicationДәл коллокация and her generosity: these days she gives up her weekends to coach children at a local clubӘдетті білдіретін Present Simple, сөз тәртібі табиғи, always smiling. She never complains when she loses, and she always congratulates the winner. In the last race I watched on television she finished first, and I shouted so loudly that my mother came into my room. In my view she shows young people that setbacks are a part of the process rather than the end of it, and when I face difficulties of my own, I try to remember her.