Describe a person you know who likes taking photos

Band 6

I would like to describe my friend Sita, who comeKesalahan kesesuaian subjek dan kata kerja: seharusnya “comes” from Pokhara in Nepal and loves taking photos. We met in the first year of university, when I joined the photography club because I wantKesalahan sesaat pada tenses: seharusnya “wanted” to try something new. On the first day I forgot my camera battery, and she lent me her spare one, so we started to talk and soon we became close friends. She takes photos almost everywhere, but her favourite place is Phewa Lake in the early morning, when the mountains are reflected in the water and the lake is, erPenanda jeda yang wajar, kata pengisi kecil, very quiet. She tellKesalahan sesaat pada tenses: seharusnya “told” me once that she waits for forty minutes in the cold just to get the light she wants. She also goes on mountain trails with her camera, and during festivals she walks around the streets and takes pictures of nice thingsFrasa nomina dasar yang kabur; membatasi Lexical Resource like lamps and dancers. Last autumn she gave me a small print of the lake, and it is on my desk now. She does not like to pose in pictures herself, she is always behind of the cameraKesalahan kata depan: seharusnya “behind the camera”. She also teaches me how to hold the camera and how to think about the picture before pressing the button. You knowFrasa pengisi yang dipakai sebagai penanda ragu, before I met her I never lookKesalahan sesaat pada tenses: seharusnya “never looked” at small details, but now I notice them. I feel very thankfulKata sifat dasar; “indebted” atau “grateful for her influence” akan mendapat skor lebih tinggi to her because she showed me that a simple moment can be very beautifulKosakata dasar; membatasi Lexical Resource, and I think she will always be my close friend.

Band 7

I’d like to describe my friend Sita, who comes from Pokhara in Nepal and loves taking photos. We met in the first year of university, when I joined the photography club because I wanted to try something new. On the first day I forgot my camera battery, and she lent me her spare one, so we started talking and soon became close friends. She photographs almost everywhere, but her favourite place is Phewa Lake in the early morning, when the mountains are reflected in the water and the whole lake is perfectly stillGabungan kata keterangan dan kata sifat yang akurat dalam klausa koordinatif. She told me once that she’ll wait forty minutes in the cold just to get the light she wants. She also goes on mountain trails with her camera, and during festivals she wanders through the streets capturing lamps, dancers and street foodDetail spesifik, bukan frasa umum. Last autumn she gave me a small print of the lake, and it’s on my desk now. She doesn’t like posing herself, so she’s usually behind of the cameraKesalahan kata depan: seharusnya “behind the camera”. She also teaches me how to hold the camera and how to think about the picture before pressing the button, and she is extremely patient with beginners like me. Before I met her I never really paid attention to small detailsKolokasi yang alami, but now I notice them everywhere. I feel very grateful to her because she showed me that an ordinary moment can be worth keepingFrasa ringkas yang alami dan menghindari kata sifat dasar, and I think we’ll stay friends for many years.

Band 8

I’d like to describe my friend Sita, who comes from Pokhara in Nepal and has a real passion for photography. We met in the first year of university, when I joined the photography club because I wanted to try something new. On the first day I forgot my camera battery, and she lent me her spare one, so we got talking and soon became close friends. She photographs almost everywhere, but her favourite spot is Phewa Lake at dawn, when the mountains are reflected in the water and the whole lake is perfectly stillGabungan kata keterangan dan kata sifat yang akurat dalam klausa koordinatif. She once told me that she’ll happily wait forty minutes in the cold to get exactly the light she wants. She also heads out on mountain trails with her camera, and during festivals she wanders through the streets capturing lamps, dancers and street food. Last autumn she gave me a small print of the lake, which now sits on my desk. She hates posing herself, so she’s nearly always behind the camera. She has also taught me to hold the camera properly and to think about the picture before pressing the button. Before I met her I’d never really paid attention to small detailsKolokasi yang alami, whereas now I notice them everywhere. I feel enormously grateful to her, because she showed me that an ordinary moment can be worth keepingStruktur ujaran tidak langsung dengan modal yang dipakai dengan akurat, and looking backPenanda wacana yang alami untuk membuka refleksi, that club meeting was one of the luckiest accidents of my university life.