Describe a person you know who likes taking photos

Band 6

I would like to describe my friend Sita, who come주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “comes” from Pokhara in Nepal and loves taking photos. We met in the first year of university, when I joined the photography club because I want시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “wanted” to try something new. On the first day I forgot my camera battery, and she lent me her spare one, so we started to talk and soon we became close friends. She takes photos almost everywhere, but her favourite place is Phewa Lake in the early morning, when the mountains are reflected in the water and the lake is, er자연스러운 머뭇거림 표지, 가벼운 군말, very quiet. She tell시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “told” me once that she waits for forty minutes in the cold just to get the light she wants. She also goes on mountain trails with her camera, and during festivals she walks around the streets and takes pictures of nice things모호하고 기본적인 명사구, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 like lamps and dancers. Last autumn she gave me a small print of the lake, and it is on my desk now. She does not like to pose in pictures herself, she is always behind of the camera전치사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “behind the camera”. She also teaches me how to hold the camera and how to think about the picture before pressing the button. You know머뭇거림 표지로 쓰인 군말, before I met her I never look시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “never looked” at small details, but now I notice them. I feel very thankful기본적인 형용사, “indebted”나 “grateful for her influence”를 쓰면 더 높은 점수를 받음 to her because she showed me that a simple moment can be very beautiful기본적인 어휘, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함, and I think she will always be my close friend.

Band 7

I’d like to describe my friend Sita, who comes from Pokhara in Nepal and loves taking photos. We met in the first year of university, when I joined the photography club because I wanted to try something new. On the first day I forgot my camera battery, and she lent me her spare one, so we started talking and soon became close friends. She photographs almost everywhere, but her favourite place is Phewa Lake in the early morning, when the mountains are reflected in the water and the whole lake is perfectly still등위절에서 부사와 형용사의 조합을 정확하게 사용. She told me once that she’ll wait forty minutes in the cold just to get the light she wants. She also goes on mountain trails with her camera, and during festivals she wanders through the streets capturing lamps, dancers and street food막연한 표현 대신 구체적인 세부 내용. Last autumn she gave me a small print of the lake, and it’s on my desk now. She doesn’t like posing herself, so she’s usually behind of the camera전치사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “behind the camera”. She also teaches me how to hold the camera and how to think about the picture before pressing the button, and she is extremely patient with beginners like me. Before I met her I never really paid attention to small details자연스러운 콜로케이션, but now I notice them everywhere. I feel very grateful to her because she showed me that an ordinary moment can be worth keeping기본적인 형용사를 피한 자연스럽고 간결한 표현, and I think we’ll stay friends for many years.

Band 8

I’d like to describe my friend Sita, who comes from Pokhara in Nepal and has a real passion for photography. We met in the first year of university, when I joined the photography club because I wanted to try something new. On the first day I forgot my camera battery, and she lent me her spare one, so we got talking and soon became close friends. She photographs almost everywhere, but her favourite spot is Phewa Lake at dawn, when the mountains are reflected in the water and the whole lake is perfectly still등위절에서 부사와 형용사의 조합을 정확하게 사용. She once told me that she’ll happily wait forty minutes in the cold to get exactly the light she wants. She also heads out on mountain trails with her camera, and during festivals she wanders through the streets capturing lamps, dancers and street food. Last autumn she gave me a small print of the lake, which now sits on my desk. She hates posing herself, so she’s nearly always behind the camera. She has also taught me to hold the camera properly and to think about the picture before pressing the button. Before I met her I’d never really paid attention to small details자연스러운 콜로케이션, whereas now I notice them everywhere. I feel enormously grateful to her, because she showed me that an ordinary moment can be worth keeping조동사를 정확하게 쓴 간접 화법 구조, and looking back성찰을 이끄는 자연스러운 담화 표지, that club meeting was one of the luckiest accidents of my university life.