Describe a person you know who likes taking photos

Band 6

I would like to describe my friend Sita, who comeLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “comes” from Pokhara in Nepal and loves taking photos. We met in the first year of university, when I joined the photography club because I wantLỗi thì: phải là “wanted” to try something new. On the first day I forgot my camera battery, and she lent me her spare one, so we started to talk and soon we became close friends. She takes photos almost everywhere, but her favourite place is Phewa Lake in the early morning, when the mountains are reflected in the water and the lake is, erTừ ngập ngừng tự nhiên, từ đệm không đáng kể, very quiet. She tellLỗi thì: phải là “told” me once that she waits for forty minutes in the cold just to get the light she wants. She also goes on mountain trails with her camera, and during festivals she walks around the streets and takes pictures of nice thingsCụm danh từ cơ bản, mơ hồ, hạn chế Lexical Resource like lamps and dancers. Last autumn she gave me a small print of the lake, and it is on my desk now. She does not like to pose in pictures herself, she is always behind of the cameraLỗi giới từ: phải là “behind the camera”. She also teaches me how to hold the camera and how to think about the picture before pressing the button. You knowCụm từ đệm dùng để ngập ngừng, before I met her I never lookLỗi thì: phải là “never looked” at small details, but now I notice them. I feel very thankfulTính từ cơ bản; “indebted” hoặc “grateful for her influence” sẽ được điểm cao hơn to her because she showed me that a simple moment can be very beautifulTừ vựng cơ bản, hạn chế Lexical Resource, and I think she will always be my close friend.

Band 7

I’d like to describe my friend Sita, who comes from Pokhara in Nepal and loves taking photos. We met in the first year of university, when I joined the photography club because I wanted to try something new. On the first day I forgot my camera battery, and she lent me her spare one, so we started talking and soon became close friends. She photographs almost everywhere, but her favourite place is Phewa Lake in the early morning, when the mountains are reflected in the water and the whole lake is perfectly stillTổ hợp trạng từ và tính từ chính xác trong mệnh đề được nối bằng liên từ. She told me once that she’ll wait forty minutes in the cold just to get the light she wants. She also goes on mountain trails with her camera, and during festivals she wanders through the streets capturing lamps, dancers and street foodChi tiết cụ thể thay cho cụm từ chung chung. Last autumn she gave me a small print of the lake, and it’s on my desk now. She doesn’t like posing herself, so she’s usually behind of the cameraLỗi giới từ: phải là “behind the camera”. She also teaches me how to hold the camera and how to think about the picture before pressing the button, and she is extremely patient with beginners like me. Before I met her I never really paid attention to small detailsCollocation tự nhiên, but now I notice them everywhere. I feel very grateful to her because she showed me that an ordinary moment can be worth keepingCụm từ tự nhiên, ngắn gọn, tránh dùng tính từ cơ bản, and I think we’ll stay friends for many years.

Band 8

I’d like to describe my friend Sita, who comes from Pokhara in Nepal and has a real passion for photography. We met in the first year of university, when I joined the photography club because I wanted to try something new. On the first day I forgot my camera battery, and she lent me her spare one, so we got talking and soon became close friends. She photographs almost everywhere, but her favourite spot is Phewa Lake at dawn, when the mountains are reflected in the water and the whole lake is perfectly stillTổ hợp trạng từ và tính từ chính xác trong mệnh đề được nối bằng liên từ. She once told me that she’ll happily wait forty minutes in the cold to get exactly the light she wants. She also heads out on mountain trails with her camera, and during festivals she wanders through the streets capturing lamps, dancers and street food. Last autumn she gave me a small print of the lake, which now sits on my desk. She hates posing herself, so she’s nearly always behind the camera. She has also taught me to hold the camera properly and to think about the picture before pressing the button. Before I met her I’d never really paid attention to small detailsCollocation tự nhiên, whereas now I notice them everywhere. I feel enormously grateful to her, because she showed me that an ordinary moment can be worth keepingCấu trúc câu tường thuật với động từ khuyết thiếu, dùng chính xác, and looking backDiscourse marker tự nhiên dẫn vào sự suy ngẫm, that club meeting was one of the luckiest accidents of my university life.