Describe a public building you enjoy visiting

Band 6

I want to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which is a place I really enjoy to visit動詞句型錯誤：應為「enjoy visiting」. It is about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first know時態錯誤：應為「got to know」 it when I was ten years old because my grandmother bring時態錯誤：應為「took」或「brought」 me there to find books for a school project. At that time I was, er猶豫時使用的填充詞, a little shy, but the librarian was very kind and she showed me the children’s corner. Now the building looks very old and very nice重複使用基本形容詞，限制了Lexical Resource的分數. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. There are a lot of windows, so the room has good light基本的詞語搭配；「plenty of natural light」更精準 even in the afternoon. On weekends they also have small events, for example a book club for teenagers and drawing lessons for children. I usually go on Saturday morning and stay since three hours介系詞錯誤：應為「for three hours」, and I always leave with a good feeling基本說法；「a sense of achievement」更精準. The librarians knows主詞動詞不一致：應為「know」 my name now, so it feels more welcome. I enjoy visiting it because it is quiet and I can concentrate me反身代名詞錯誤：應為「concentrate」 better than at home. Also, I often meet my old school friends there, you know當作停頓使用的填充詞, and we study together in the same table介系詞錯誤：應為「at the same table」. When I am時態錯誤：應為「was」 very stressed before exams last year, I went there every day, and it helped me a lot. For me it is not just a building, it is a very good place基本說法，限制了Lexical Resource的分數.

Band 7

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I really enjoy visiting. It’s about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first got to know it when I was ten, because my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was quite shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patient精準的形容詞選擇 and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintained自然的詞語搭配. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel even more welcoming. I enjoy going there because it’s so quiet that I can concentrate more good詞形錯誤：應為「concentrate much better」 than at home. I also bump into old school friends there, and we usually end up studying together自然的連接用語，讓敘述流暢. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly calm準確的關係子句，限定語清楚. For me it’s not just a building, it’s a place where I feels主詞動詞不一致：應為「I feel」 at home.

Band 8

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I’ve enjoyed visiting for years. It’s about ten minutes from my house, tucked away beside a small park. I first got to know it at the age of ten, when my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was rather shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patient and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintained. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even late in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve genuinely achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel all the more welcoming. What I value most is how quiet it is, which lets me concentrate far better than I can at home帶有關係子句的分裂句，準確而自然. I also bump into慣用的片語動詞 old school friends there, and we usually end up studying together. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly at ease精準、自然的詞語搭配. For me it isn’t merely a building, it’s somewhere I feel at home.