Describe a public building you enjoy visiting

Band 6

I want to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which is a place I really enjoy to visitLỗi mẫu động từ: phải là “enjoy visiting”. It is about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first knowLỗi thì: phải là “got to know” it when I was ten years old because my grandmother bringLỗi thì: phải là “took” hoặc “brought” me there to find books for a school project. At that time I was, erTừ đệm ngập ngừng, a little shy, but the librarian was very kind and she showed me the children’s corner. Now the building looks very old and very niceTính từ cơ bản bị lặp lại, hạn chế Lexical Resource. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. There are a lot of windows, so the room has good lightCollocation cơ bản; “plenty of natural light” chính xác hơn even in the afternoon. On weekends they also have small events, for example a book club for teenagers and drawing lessons for children. I usually go on Saturday morning and stay since three hoursLỗi giới từ: phải là “for three hours”, and I always leave with a good feelingCụm từ cơ bản; “a sense of achievement” chính xác hơn. The librarians knowsLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “know” my name now, so it feels more welcome. I enjoy visiting it because it is quiet and I can concentrate meLỗi đại từ phản thân: phải là “concentrate” better than at home. Also, I often meet my old school friends there, you knowTừ đệm dùng để ngập ngừng, and we study together in the same tableLỗi giới từ: phải là “at the same table”. When I amLỗi thì: phải là “was” very stressed before exams last year, I went there every day, and it helped me a lot. For me it is not just a building, it is a very good placeCụm từ cơ bản, hạn chế Lexical Resource.

Band 7

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I really enjoy visiting. It’s about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first got to know it when I was ten, because my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was quite shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patientLựa chọn tính từ chính xác and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintainedCollocation tự nhiên. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel even more welcoming. I enjoy going there because it’s so quiet that I can concentrate more goodLỗi dạng từ: phải là “concentrate much better” than at home. I also bump into old school friends there, and we usually end up studying togetherCụm nối tự nhiên giúp mạch kể trôi chảy. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly calmMệnh đề quan hệ chính xác, kèm một từ giới hạn rõ ràng. For me it’s not just a building, it’s a place where I feelsLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “I feel” at home.

Band 8

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I’ve enjoyed visiting for years. It’s about ten minutes from my house, tucked away beside a small park. I first got to know it at the age of ten, when my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was rather shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patient and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintained. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even late in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve genuinely achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel all the more welcoming. What I value most is how quiet it is, which lets me concentrate far better than I can at homeCâu chẻ với mệnh đề quan hệ, chính xác và tự nhiên. I also bump intoCụm động từ mang tính thành ngữ old school friends there, and we usually end up studying together. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly at easeCollocation chính xác, tự nhiên. For me it isn’t merely a building, it’s somewhere I feel at home.