Describe a public building you enjoy visiting

Band 6

I want to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which is a place I really enjoy to visit動名詞の誤り：正しくは「enjoy visiting」. It is about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first know時制の誤り：正しくは「got to know」 it when I was ten years old because my grandmother bring時制の誤り：正しくは「took」または「brought」 me there to find books for a school project. At that time I was, er自然な間、気にならないつなぎ言葉, a little shy, but the librarian was very kind and she showed me the children’s corner. Now the building looks very old and very nice基本的な形容詞の繰り返しで、Lexical Resourceの評価が伸びない. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. There are a lot of windows, so the room has good light基本的なコロケーション：「plenty of natural light」のほうが正確 even in the afternoon. On weekends they also have small events, for example a book club for teenagers and drawing lessons for children. I usually go on Saturday morning and stay since three hours前置詞の誤り：正しくは「for three hours」, and I always leave with a good feeling基本的な言い回し：「a sense of achievement」のほうが正確. The librarians knows主語と動詞の不一致：正しくは「know」 my name now, so it feels more welcome. I enjoy visiting it because it is quiet and I can concentrate me再帰代名詞の誤り：正しくは「concentrate」 better than at home. Also, I often meet my old school friends there, you know間を埋めるつなぎ言葉として使っている, and we study together in the same table前置詞の誤り：正しくは「at the same table」. When I am時制の誤り：正しくは「was」 very stressed before exams last year, I went there every day, and it helped me a lot. For me it is not just a building, it is a very good place基本的な言い回しで、Lexical Resourceの評価が伸びない.

Band 7

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I really enjoy visiting. It’s about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first got to know it when I was ten, because my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was quite shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patient的確な形容詞選び and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintained自然なコロケーション. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel even more welcoming. I enjoy going there because it’s so quiet that I can concentrate more good形の誤り：正しくは「concentrate much better」 than at home. I also bump into old school friends there, and we usually end up studying together話の流れを保つ、自然なつなぎの表現. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly calm明確な限定を伴う関係詞節を、正確に使っている. For me it’s not just a building, it’s a place where I feels主語と動詞の不一致：正しくは「I feel」 at home.

Band 8

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I’ve enjoyed visiting for years. It’s about ten minutes from my house, tucked away beside a small park. I first got to know it at the age of ten, when my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was rather shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patient and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintained. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even late in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve genuinely achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel all the more welcoming. What I value most is how quiet it is, which lets me concentrate far better than I can at home関係詞節を伴う分裂文を、正確かつ自然に使っている. I also bump into慣用的な句動詞 old school friends there, and we usually end up studying together. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly at ease的確で自然なコロケーション. For me it isn’t merely a building, it’s somewhere I feel at home.