Describe a public building you enjoy visiting

Band 6

I want to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which is a place I really enjoy to visitKesalahan pola kata kerja: seharusnya “enjoy visiting”. It is about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first knowKesalahan sesaat pada tenses: seharusnya “got to know” it when I was ten years old because my grandmother bringKesalahan sesaat pada tenses: seharusnya “took” atau “brought” me there to find books for a school project. At that time I was, erKata pengisi saat ragu, a little shy, but the librarian was very kind and she showed me the children’s corner. Now the building looks very old and very niceKata sifat dasar yang diulang; membatasi Lexical Resource. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. There are a lot of windows, so the room has good lightKolokasi dasar; “plenty of natural light” lebih tepat even in the afternoon. On weekends they also have small events, for example a book club for teenagers and drawing lessons for children. I usually go on Saturday morning and stay since three hoursKesalahan kata depan: seharusnya “for three hours”, and I always leave with a good feelingFrasa dasar; “a sense of achievement” lebih tepat. The librarians knowsKesalahan kesesuaian subjek dan kata kerja: seharusnya “know” my name now, so it feels more welcome. I enjoy visiting it because it is quiet and I can concentrate meKesalahan refleksif: seharusnya “concentrate” better than at home. Also, I often meet my old school friends there, you knowKata pengisi yang dipakai sebagai penanda ragu, and we study together in the same tableKesalahan kata depan: seharusnya “at the same table”. When I amKesalahan sesaat pada tenses: seharusnya “was” very stressed before exams last year, I went there every day, and it helped me a lot. For me it is not just a building, it is a very good placeFrasa dasar; membatasi Lexical Resource.

Band 7

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I really enjoy visiting. It’s about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first got to know it when I was ten, because my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was quite shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patientPilihan kata sifat yang tepat and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintainedKolokasi yang alami. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel even more welcoming. I enjoy going there because it’s so quiet that I can concentrate more goodKesalahan bentuk: seharusnya “concentrate much better” than at home. I also bump into old school friends there, and we usually end up studying togetherFrasa penghubung yang alami menjaga cerita tetap mengalir. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly calmKlausa relatif yang akurat dengan pembatas yang jelas. For me it’s not just a building, it’s a place where I feelsKesalahan kesesuaian subjek dan kata kerja: seharusnya “I feel” at home.

Band 8

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I’ve enjoyed visiting for years. It’s about ten minutes from my house, tucked away beside a small park. I first got to know it at the age of ten, when my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was rather shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patient and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintained. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even late in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve genuinely achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel all the more welcoming. What I value most is how quiet it is, which lets me concentrate far better than I can at homeKalimat belah dengan klausa relatif, akurat dan alami. I also bump intoPhrasal verb idiomatis old school friends there, and we usually end up studying together. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly at easeKolokasi yang tepat dan alami. For me it isn’t merely a building, it’s somewhere I feel at home.