Describe a public building you enjoy visiting

Band 6

I want to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which is a place I really enjoy to visitใช้โครงสร้างกริยาผิด ต้องเป็น “enjoy visiting”. It is about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first knowใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “got to know” it when I was ten years old because my grandmother bringใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “took” หรือ “brought” me there to find books for a school project. At that time I was, erคำเติมที่ใช้หยุดคิด, a little shy, but the librarian was very kind and she showed me the children’s corner. Now the building looks very old and very niceใช้คำคุณศัพท์พื้นฐานซ้ำ จำกัดคะแนน Lexical Resource. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. There are a lot of windows, so the room has good lightcollocation พื้นฐาน “plenty of natural light” แม่นยำกว่า even in the afternoon. On weekends they also have small events, for example a book club for teenagers and drawing lessons for children. I usually go on Saturday morning and stay since three hoursใช้คำบุพบทผิด ต้องเป็น “for three hours”, and I always leave with a good feelingวลีพื้นฐาน “a sense of achievement” แม่นยำกว่า. The librarians knowsประธานกับกริยาไม่สอดคล้องกัน ต้องเป็น “know” my name now, so it feels more welcome. I enjoy visiting it because it is quiet and I can concentrate meใช้ reflexive pronoun ผิด ต้องเป็น “concentrate” better than at home. Also, I often meet my old school friends there, you knowใช้คำเติมเป็นตัวหยุดคิด, and we study together in the same tableใช้คำบุพบทผิด ต้องเป็น “at the same table”. When I amใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “was” very stressed before exams last year, I went there every day, and it helped me a lot. For me it is not just a building, it is a very good placeวลีพื้นฐาน จำกัดคะแนน Lexical Resource.

Band 7

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I really enjoy visiting. It’s about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first got to know it when I was ten, because my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was quite shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patientเลือกคำคุณศัพท์ได้แม่นยำ and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintainedcollocation ที่เป็นธรรมชาติ. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel even more welcoming. I enjoy going there because it’s so quiet that I can concentrate more goodใช้รูปคำผิด ต้องเป็น “concentrate much better” than at home. I also bump into old school friends there, and we usually end up studying togetherวลีเชื่อมที่เป็นธรรมชาติช่วยให้เรื่องเล่าลื่นไหล. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly calmrelative clause ที่ถูกต้องพร้อมตัวขยายที่ชัดเจน. For me it’s not just a building, it’s a place where I feelsประธานกับกริยาไม่สอดคล้องกัน ต้องเป็น “I feel” at home.

Band 8

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I’ve enjoyed visiting for years. It’s about ten minutes from my house, tucked away beside a small park. I first got to know it at the age of ten, when my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was rather shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patient and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintained. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even late in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve genuinely achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel all the more welcoming. What I value most is how quiet it is, which lets me concentrate far better than I can at homecleft sentence ที่มี relative clause ใช้ถูกต้องและเป็นธรรมชาติ. I also bump intophrasal verb แบบสำนวน old school friends there, and we usually end up studying together. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly at easecollocation ที่แม่นยำและเป็นธรรมชาติ. For me it isn’t merely a building, it’s somewhere I feel at home.