Describe a public building you enjoy visiting

Band 6

I want to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which is a place I really enjoy to visitKesilapan corak kata kerja: sepatutnya “enjoy visiting”. It is about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first knowKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “got to know” it when I was ten years old because my grandmother bringKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “took” atau “brought” me there to find books for a school project. At that time I was, erKata pengisi yang menunjukkan teragak-agak, a little shy, but the librarian was very kind and she showed me the children’s corner. Now the building looks very old and very niceKata adjektif asas yang berulang; menghadkan Lexical Resource. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. There are a lot of windows, so the room has good lightKolokasi asas; “plenty of natural light” lebih tepat even in the afternoon. On weekends they also have small events, for example a book club for teenagers and drawing lessons for children. I usually go on Saturday morning and stay since three hoursKesilapan kata sendi nama: sepatutnya “for three hours”, and I always leave with a good feelingFrasa asas; “a sense of achievement” lebih tepat. The librarians knowsKesilapan persetujuan: sepatutnya “know” my name now, so it feels more welcome. I enjoy visiting it because it is quiet and I can concentrate meKesilapan refleksif: sepatutnya “concentrate” better than at home. Also, I often meet my old school friends there, you knowKata pengisi yang digunakan sebagai penanda teragak-agak, and we study together in the same tableKesilapan kata sendi nama: sepatutnya “at the same table”. When I amKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “was” very stressed before exams last year, I went there every day, and it helped me a lot. For me it is not just a building, it is a very good placeFrasa asas; menghadkan Lexical Resource.

Band 7

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I really enjoy visiting. It’s about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first got to know it when I was ten, because my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was quite shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patientPilihan kata adjektif yang tepat and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintainedKolokasi yang semula jadi. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel even more welcoming. I enjoy going there because it’s so quiet that I can concentrate more goodKesilapan bentuk: sepatutnya “concentrate much better” than at home. I also bump into old school friends there, and we usually end up studying togetherFrasa penghubung yang semula jadi mengekalkan aliran cerita. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly calmRelative clause yang tepat dengan penentu yang jelas. For me it’s not just a building, it’s a place where I feelsKesilapan persetujuan: sepatutnya “I feel” at home.

Band 8

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I’ve enjoyed visiting for years. It’s about ten minutes from my house, tucked away beside a small park. I first got to know it at the age of ten, when my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was rather shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patient and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintained. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even late in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve genuinely achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel all the more welcoming. What I value most is how quiet it is, which lets me concentrate far better than I can at homeCleft sentence dengan relative clause, tepat dan semula jadi. I also bump intoPhrasal verb idiomatik old school friends there, and we usually end up studying together. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly at easeKolokasi yang tepat dan semula jadi. For me it isn’t merely a building, it’s somewhere I feel at home.