Describe a public building you enjoy visiting

Band 6

I want to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which is a place I really enjoy to visit동사 패턴 오류: 올바른 형태는 “enjoy visiting”. It is about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first know시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “got to know” it when I was ten years old because my grandmother bring시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “took” 또는 “brought” me there to find books for a school project. At that time I was, er머뭇거림을 나타내는 군말, a little shy, but the librarian was very kind and she showed me the children’s corner. Now the building looks very old and very nice기본적인 형용사의 반복, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. There are a lot of windows, so the room has good light기본적인 콜로케이션: “plenty of natural light”가 더 정확함 even in the afternoon. On weekends they also have small events, for example a book club for teenagers and drawing lessons for children. I usually go on Saturday morning and stay since three hours전치사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “for three hours”, and I always leave with a good feeling기본적인 표현: “a sense of achievement”가 더 정확함. The librarians knows수 일치 오류: 올바른 형태는 “know” my name now, so it feels more welcome. I enjoy visiting it because it is quiet and I can concentrate me재귀대명사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “concentrate” better than at home. Also, I often meet my old school friends there, you know머뭇거림을 나타내는 군말로 쓰임, and we study together in the same table전치사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “at the same table”. When I am시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “was” very stressed before exams last year, I went there every day, and it helped me a lot. For me it is not just a building, it is a very good place기본적인 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함.

Band 7

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I really enjoy visiting. It’s about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first got to know it when I was ten, because my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was quite shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patient정확한 형용사 선택 and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintained자연스러운 콜로케이션. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel even more welcoming. I enjoy going there because it’s so quiet that I can concentrate more good형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “concentrate much better” than at home. I also bump into old school friends there, and we usually end up studying together이야기가 매끄럽게 이어지게 하는 자연스러운 연결 표현. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly calm분명한 한정 표현이 있는 정확한 관계절. For me it’s not just a building, it’s a place where I feels수 일치 오류: 올바른 형태는 “I feel” at home.

Band 8

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I’ve enjoyed visiting for years. It’s about ten minutes from my house, tucked away beside a small park. I first got to know it at the age of ten, when my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was rather shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patient and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintained. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even late in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve genuinely achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel all the more welcoming. What I value most is how quiet it is, which lets me concentrate far better than I can at home관계절을 쓴 분열문, 정확하고 자연스러움. I also bump into관용적인 구동사 old school friends there, and we usually end up studying together. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly at ease정확하고 자연스러운 콜로케이션. For me it isn’t merely a building, it’s somewhere I feel at home.