Describe a public building you enjoy visiting

Band 6

I want to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which is a place I really enjoy to visitЕтістік құрылымының қатесі: «enjoy visiting» болуы керек. It is about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first knowШақ қатесі: «got to know» болуы керек it when I was ten years old because my grandmother bringШақ қатесі: «took» немесе «brought» болуы керек me there to find books for a school project. At that time I was, erТабиғи кідіріс, елеусіз толтырғыш сөз, a little shy, but the librarian was very kind and she showed me the children’s corner. Now the building looks very old and very niceҚайталанатын қарапайым сын есімдер; Lexical Resource критерийін шектейді. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. There are a lot of windows, so the room has good lightҚарапайым коллокация; «plenty of natural light» дәлірек even in the afternoon. On weekends they also have small events, for example a book club for teenagers and drawing lessons for children. I usually go on Saturday morning and stay since three hoursПредлог қатесі: «for three hours» болуы керек, and I always leave with a good feelingҚарапайым тіркес; «a sense of achievement» дәлірек. The librarians knowsБастауыш пен баяндауыштың қиыспауы: «know» болуы керек my name now, so it feels more welcome. I enjoy visiting it because it is quiet and I can concentrate meРефлексивті форма қатесі: «concentrate» болуы керек better than at home. Also, I often meet my old school friends there, you knowКідіріс белгісі ретінде қолданылған толтырғыш сөз, and we study together in the same tableПредлог қатесі: «at the same table» болуы керек. When I amШақ қатесі: «was» болуы керек very stressed before exams last year, I went there every day, and it helped me a lot. For me it is not just a building, it is a very good placeҚарапайым тіркес; Lexical Resource критерийін шектейді.

Band 7

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I really enjoy visiting. It’s about ten minutes from my house, near a small park. I first got to know it when I was ten, because my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was quite shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patientДәл сын есім таңдау and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintainedТабиғи коллокация. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel even more welcoming. I enjoy going there because it’s so quiet that I can concentrate more goodФорма қатесі: «concentrate much better» болуы керек than at home. I also bump into old school friends there, and we usually end up studying togetherТабиғи байланыстырушы тіркес әңгімені үздіксіз ұстайды. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly calmАнық шектеуші сөзі бар дұрыс relative clause. For me it’s not just a building, it’s a place where I feelsБастауыш пен баяндауыштың қиыспауы: «I feel» болуы керек at home.

Band 8

I’d like to describe the public library in my neighbourhood in Curitiba, which I’ve enjoyed visiting for years. It’s about ten minutes from my house, tucked away beside a small park. I first got to know it at the age of ten, when my grandmother took me there to find books for a school project. I was rather shy back then, but the librarian was incredibly patient and showed me the children’s corner. These days the building looks old but well maintained. It has a glass front and a high ceiling, and inside there are long wooden tables where people read and study. Tall windows fill the room with natural light, even late in the afternoon. At weekends it also runs small events, such as a book club for teenagers and drawing classes for children. I usually go on Saturday mornings and stay for about three hours, and I always leave feeling that I’ve genuinely achieved something. The librarians know me by name now, which makes the place feel all the more welcoming. What I value most is how quiet it is, which lets me concentrate far better than I can at homeДұрыс әрі табиғи қолданылған relative clause бар cleft sentence. I also bump intoИдиомалық phrasal verb old school friends there, and we usually end up studying together. When I was under a lot of pressure before my exams last year, I went every day, and it was the only place where I felt properly at easeДәл, табиғи коллокация. For me it isn’t merely a building, it’s somewhere I feel at home.