Describe a party for a special event that impressed you

Band 6

I would like to talk about a birthday party that really impressLỗi dạng động từ: phải là “impressed” me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, and it was for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday. It was a surprise, so she did not know anything about it. My cousins and I planLỗi thì: phải là “planned” it for two months, and, erTừ đệm ngập ngừng, my aunt cooked a lot of food. About sixty people came, and they were relatives, neighbours and some friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt decorateLỗi thì: phải là “decorated” the garden with small lights and yellow flowers, because they are my grandmother’s favourite. We also hireLỗi thì: phải là “hired” a small band that played songs from her young days, and everybody danced, even the children. When she arrived, she was very surpriseLỗi dạng từ: phải là “was very surprised” and she started to cry. I was really happyCụm từ cơ bản, hạn chế Lexical Resource to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow with old photos of her, and my uncle makeLỗi thì: phải là “made” a speech about her life. It was a very nice speechCách nói cơ bản; “heartfelt speech” chính xác hơn and many people were crying. The party impressed me so much because my family worked hard for it, you knowTừ đệm dùng để ngập ngừng, and everybody came from different cities only to say thank you to her. I never seeLỗi thì: phải là “had never seen” my family so united before. She told me later that it was the happiest day of her old age. I takeLỗi thì: phải là “took” many photos that night, and I still look at them when I want to feel happy. I think it was the best party in my life.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a birthday party that really impressed me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday. It was a surprise, so she had no idea about it. My cousins and I had been planning it for two months, and my aunt cooked enough food for a small army. About sixty people came: relatives, neighbours and a few friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt had decorated the garden with fairy lights and yellow flowers, which are my grandmother’s favourite, and we’d hired a small band that played songs from her youth, so everybody danced, even the children. When she walked in she was so surpriseLỗi dạng từ: phải là “so surprised”, and she burst into tears. I was thrilledTính từ chính xác, sinh động to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow of old photos, and my uncle gave a heartfelt speechCollocation tự nhiên about her life that left many people in tears. What impressed me most was how much effort everyone had put inCâu chẻ giúp phần giải thích rõ ràng, có tổ chức, because relatives travelled from other cities just to thank her. I’d never seen my family so much unitedLỗi trật tự từ: phải là “so united” before. She told me afterwards that it was the happiest day she’d had in years. I took dozens of photos that night, and I still look at them when I want to feel cheerful. I think it was the best party I’ve ever gone toLỗi collocation: phải là “been to”.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a birthday party that really impressed me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday, and it was a surprise, so she had no idea. My cousins and I had been planning it for two months, and my aunt cooked enough food for a small army. About sixty people came: relatives, neighbours and a few friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt had decorated the garden with fairy lights and yellow flowers, which are my grandmother’s favourite, and we’d hired a small band that played songs from her youth, so everybody danced, even the children. When she walked in she was completely taken aback, and then she burst into tears. I was thrilled to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow of old photos, and my uncle gave a heartfelt speech about her life that left many people in tears. What impressed me most was how much effort everyone had put in, since relatives had travelled from other cities just to thank herCâu chẻ kèm mệnh đề lý do ở thì quá khứ hoàn thành, chính xác từ đầu đến cuối. I’d never seen my family pull togetherCụm động từ mang tính thành ngữ like that before. She told me afterwards that it was the happiest day she’d had in years, and I took dozens of photos that night that I still look at whenever I want cheering up. I think it was the best party I’ve ever been to, not because it was lavish, but because it was so sincereSự tương phản cân bằng khép bài một cách tự nhiên.