Describe a party for a special event that impressed you

الدرجة 6

I would like to talk about a birthday party that really impressخطأ في صيغة الفعل، والصواب «impressed» me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, and it was for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday. It was a surprise, so she did not know anything about it. My cousins and I planخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «planned» it for two months, and, erحشو يدل على التردد, my aunt cooked a lot of food. About sixty people came, and they were relatives, neighbours and some friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt decorateخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «decorated» the garden with small lights and yellow flowers, because they are my grandmother’s favourite. We also hireخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «hired» a small band that played songs from her young days, and everybody danced, even the children. When she arrived, she was very surpriseخطأ في الصيغة، والصواب «was very surprised» and she started to cry. I was really happyعبارة بسيطة، وهذا يحدّ من درجة الثروة اللغوية to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow with old photos of her, and my uncle makeخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «made» a speech about her life. It was a very nice speechصياغة بسيطة، و«heartfelt speech» أدق and many people were crying. The party impressed me so much because my family worked hard for it, you knowحشو مستخدم للدلالة على التردد, and everybody came from different cities only to say thank you to her. I never seeخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «had never seen» my family so united before. She told me later that it was the happiest day of her old age. I takeخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «took» many photos that night, and I still look at them when I want to feel happy. I think it was the best party in my life.

الدرجة 7

I’d like to talk about a birthday party that really impressed me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday. It was a surprise, so she had no idea about it. My cousins and I had been planning it for two months, and my aunt cooked enough food for a small army. About sixty people came: relatives, neighbours and a few friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt had decorated the garden with fairy lights and yellow flowers, which are my grandmother’s favourite, and we’d hired a small band that played songs from her youth, so everybody danced, even the children. When she walked in she was so surpriseخطأ في الصيغة، والصواب «so surprised», and she burst into tears. I was thrilledصفة دقيقة وحية to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow of old photos, and my uncle gave a heartfelt speechمتلازمة لفظية طبيعية about her life that left many people in tears. What impressed me most was how much effort everyone had put inجملة تأكيد مشطورة تنظّم الشرح بوضوح, because relatives travelled from other cities just to thank her. I’d never seen my family so much unitedخطأ عابر في ترتيب الكلمات، والصواب «so united» before. She told me afterwards that it was the happiest day she’d had in years. I took dozens of photos that night, and I still look at them when I want to feel cheerful. I think it was the best party I’ve ever gone toخطأ عابر في المتلازمة اللفظية، والصواب «been to».

الدرجة 8

I’d like to talk about a birthday party that really impressed me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday, and it was a surprise, so she had no idea. My cousins and I had been planning it for two months, and my aunt cooked enough food for a small army. About sixty people came: relatives, neighbours and a few friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt had decorated the garden with fairy lights and yellow flowers, which are my grandmother’s favourite, and we’d hired a small band that played songs from her youth, so everybody danced, even the children. When she walked in she was completely taken aback, and then she burst into tears. I was thrilled to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow of old photos, and my uncle gave a heartfelt speech about her life that left many people in tears. What impressed me most was how much effort everyone had put in, since relatives had travelled from other cities just to thank herجملة تأكيد مشطورة تليها جملة سببية بزمن الماضي التام، دقيقة من أولها إلى آخرها. I’d never seen my family pull togetherفعل مركب اصطلاحي like that before. She told me afterwards that it was the happiest day she’d had in years, and I took dozens of photos that night that I still look at whenever I want cheering up. I think it was the best party I’ve ever been to, not because it was lavish, but because it was so sincereمقابلة متوازنة تختم الإجابة بشكل طبيعي.