Describe a party for a special event that impressed you

Band 6

I would like to talk about a birthday party that really impress동사 형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “impressed” me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, and it was for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday. It was a surprise, so she did not know anything about it. My cousins and I plan시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “planned” it for two months, and, er머뭇거림을 나타내는 군말, my aunt cooked a lot of food. About sixty people came, and they were relatives, neighbours and some friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt decorate시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “decorated” the garden with small lights and yellow flowers, because they are my grandmother’s favourite. We also hire시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “hired” a small band that played songs from her young days, and everybody danced, even the children. When she arrived, she was very surprise형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “was very surprised” and she started to cry. I was really happy기본적인 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow with old photos of her, and my uncle make시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “made” a speech about her life. It was a very nice speech기본적인 표현: “heartfelt speech”가 더 정확함 and many people were crying. The party impressed me so much because my family worked hard for it, you know머뭇거림을 나타내는 군말로 쓰임, and everybody came from different cities only to say thank you to her. I never see시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “had never seen” my family so united before. She told me later that it was the happiest day of her old age. I take시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “took” many photos that night, and I still look at them when I want to feel happy. I think it was the best party in my life.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a birthday party that really impressed me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday. It was a surprise, so she had no idea about it. My cousins and I had been planning it for two months, and my aunt cooked enough food for a small army. About sixty people came: relatives, neighbours and a few friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt had decorated the garden with fairy lights and yellow flowers, which are my grandmother’s favourite, and we’d hired a small band that played songs from her youth, so everybody danced, even the children. When she walked in she was so surprise형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “so surprised”, and she burst into tears. I was thrilled정확하고 생생한 형용사 to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow of old photos, and my uncle gave a heartfelt speech자연스러운 콜로케이션 about her life that left many people in tears. What impressed me most was how much effort everyone had put in분열문이 설명을 분명하게 정리함, because relatives travelled from other cities just to thank her. I’d never seen my family so much united어순 오류: 올바른 형태는 “so united” before. She told me afterwards that it was the happiest day she’d had in years. I took dozens of photos that night, and I still look at them when I want to feel cheerful. I think it was the best party I’ve ever gone to콜로케이션 오류: 올바른 형태는 “been to”.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a birthday party that really impressed me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday, and it was a surprise, so she had no idea. My cousins and I had been planning it for two months, and my aunt cooked enough food for a small army. About sixty people came: relatives, neighbours and a few friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt had decorated the garden with fairy lights and yellow flowers, which are my grandmother’s favourite, and we’d hired a small band that played songs from her youth, so everybody danced, even the children. When she walked in she was completely taken aback, and then she burst into tears. I was thrilled to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow of old photos, and my uncle gave a heartfelt speech about her life that left many people in tears. What impressed me most was how much effort everyone had put in, since relatives had travelled from other cities just to thank her분열문과 과거완료 이유절, 전체적으로 정확함. I’d never seen my family pull together관용적인 구동사 like that before. She told me afterwards that it was the happiest day she’d had in years, and I took dozens of photos that night that I still look at whenever I want cheering up. I think it was the best party I’ve ever been to, not because it was lavish, but because it was so sincere균형 잡힌 대조가 답변을 자연스럽게 마무리함.