Describe a party for a special event that impressed you

Band 6

I would like to talk about a birthday party that really impressЕтістік формасының қатесі: «impressed» болуы керек me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, and it was for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday. It was a surprise, so she did not know anything about it. My cousins and I planШақ қатесі: «planned» болуы керек it for two months, and, erТабиғи кідіріс, елеусіз толтырғыш сөз, my aunt cooked a lot of food. About sixty people came, and they were relatives, neighbours and some friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt decorateШақ қатесі: «decorated» болуы керек the garden with small lights and yellow flowers, because they are my grandmother’s favourite. We also hireШақ қатесі: «hired» болуы керек a small band that played songs from her young days, and everybody danced, even the children. When she arrived, she was very surpriseФорма қатесі: «was very surprised» болуы керек and she started to cry. I was really happyҚарапайым тіркес; Lexical Resource критерийін шектейді to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow with old photos of her, and my uncle makeШақ қатесі: «made» болуы керек a speech about her life. It was a very nice speechҚарапайым сөздік қор; «heartfelt speech» дәлірек and many people were crying. The party impressed me so much because my family worked hard for it, you knowКідіріс белгісі ретінде қолданылған толтырғыш сөз, and everybody came from different cities only to say thank you to her. I never seeШақ қатесі: «had never seen» болуы керек my family so united before. She told me later that it was the happiest day of her old age. I takeШақ қатесі: «took» болуы керек many photos that night, and I still look at them when I want to feel happy. I think it was the best party in my life.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a birthday party that really impressed me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday. It was a surprise, so she had no idea about it. My cousins and I had been planning it for two months, and my aunt cooked enough food for a small army. About sixty people came: relatives, neighbours and a few friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt had decorated the garden with fairy lights and yellow flowers, which are my grandmother’s favourite, and we’d hired a small band that played songs from her youth, so everybody danced, even the children. When she walked in she was so surpriseФорма қатесі: «so surprised» болуы керек, and she burst into tears. I was thrilledДәл, бейнелі сын есім to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow of old photos, and my uncle gave a heartfelt speechТабиғи коллокация about her life that left many people in tears. What impressed me most was how much effort everyone had put inCleft sentence түсіндірмені айқын ұйымдастырады, because relatives travelled from other cities just to thank her. I’d never seen my family so much unitedСөз тәртібінің қатесі: «so united» болуы керек before. She told me afterwards that it was the happiest day she’d had in years. I took dozens of photos that night, and I still look at them when I want to feel cheerful. I think it was the best party I’ve ever gone toКоллокация қатесі: «been to» болуы керек.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a birthday party that really impressed me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday, and it was a surprise, so she had no idea. My cousins and I had been planning it for two months, and my aunt cooked enough food for a small army. About sixty people came: relatives, neighbours and a few friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt had decorated the garden with fairy lights and yellow flowers, which are my grandmother’s favourite, and we’d hired a small band that played songs from her youth, so everybody danced, even the children. When she walked in she was completely taken aback, and then she burst into tears. I was thrilled to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow of old photos, and my uncle gave a heartfelt speech about her life that left many people in tears. What impressed me most was how much effort everyone had put in, since relatives had travelled from other cities just to thank herCleft sentence және past perfect себеп сөйлемшесі, бәрі дұрыс. I’d never seen my family pull togetherИдиомалық phrasal verb like that before. She told me afterwards that it was the happiest day she’d had in years, and I took dozens of photos that night that I still look at whenever I want cheering up. I think it was the best party I’ve ever been to, not because it was lavish, but because it was so sincereТеңгерімді қарама-қарсылық жауапты табиғи түйіндейді.