Describe a party for a special event that impressed you

Band 6

I would like to talk about a birthday party that really impress動詞の形の誤り：正しくは「impressed」 me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, and it was for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday. It was a surprise, so she did not know anything about it. My cousins and I plan時制の誤り：正しくは「planned」 it for two months, and, er自然な間、気にならないつなぎ言葉, my aunt cooked a lot of food. About sixty people came, and they were relatives, neighbours and some friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt decorate時制の誤り：正しくは「decorated」 the garden with small lights and yellow flowers, because they are my grandmother’s favourite. We also hire時制の誤り：正しくは「hired」 a small band that played songs from her young days, and everybody danced, even the children. When she arrived, she was very surprise形の誤り：正しくは「was very surprised」 and she started to cry. I was really happy基本的な言い回しで、Lexical Resourceの評価が伸びない to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow with old photos of her, and my uncle make時制の誤り：正しくは「made」 a speech about her life. It was a very nice speech基本的な言い回し：「heartfelt speech」のほうが正確 and many people were crying. The party impressed me so much because my family worked hard for it, you know間を埋めるつなぎ言葉として使っている, and everybody came from different cities only to say thank you to her. I never see時制の誤り：正しくは「had never seen」 my family so united before. She told me later that it was the happiest day of her old age. I take時制の誤り：正しくは「took」 many photos that night, and I still look at them when I want to feel happy. I think it was the best party in my life.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a birthday party that really impressed me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday. It was a surprise, so she had no idea about it. My cousins and I had been planning it for two months, and my aunt cooked enough food for a small army. About sixty people came: relatives, neighbours and a few friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt had decorated the garden with fairy lights and yellow flowers, which are my grandmother’s favourite, and we’d hired a small band that played songs from her youth, so everybody danced, even the children. When she walked in she was so surprise形の誤り：正しくは「so surprised」, and she burst into tears. I was thrilled的確で鮮やかな形容詞 to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow of old photos, and my uncle gave a heartfelt speech自然なコロケーション about her life that left many people in tears. What impressed me most was how much effort everyone had put in説明を整理する、わかりやすい分裂文, because relatives travelled from other cities just to thank her. I’d never seen my family so much united語順の誤り：正しくは「so united」 before. She told me afterwards that it was the happiest day she’d had in years. I took dozens of photos that night, and I still look at them when I want to feel cheerful. I think it was the best party I’ve ever gone toコロケーションの誤り：正しくは「been to」.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a birthday party that really impressed me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday, and it was a surprise, so she had no idea. My cousins and I had been planning it for two months, and my aunt cooked enough food for a small army. About sixty people came: relatives, neighbours and a few friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt had decorated the garden with fairy lights and yellow flowers, which are my grandmother’s favourite, and we’d hired a small band that played songs from her youth, so everybody danced, even the children. When she walked in she was completely taken aback, and then she burst into tears. I was thrilled to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow of old photos, and my uncle gave a heartfelt speech about her life that left many people in tears. What impressed me most was how much effort everyone had put in, since relatives had travelled from other cities just to thank her分裂文と過去完了形の理由の節を、全体を通して正確に使っている. I’d never seen my family pull together慣用的な句動詞 like that before. She told me afterwards that it was the happiest day she’d had in years, and I took dozens of photos that night that I still look at whenever I want cheering up. I think it was the best party I’ve ever been to, not because it was lavish, but because it was so sincereバランスのとれた対比が、回答を自然に締めくくっている.