Describe a party for a special event that impressed you

Band 6

I would like to talk about a birthday party that really impressKesilapan bentuk kata kerja: sepatutnya “impressed” me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, and it was for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday. It was a surprise, so she did not know anything about it. My cousins and I planKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “planned” it for two months, and, erKata pengisi yang menunjukkan teragak-agak, my aunt cooked a lot of food. About sixty people came, and they were relatives, neighbours and some friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt decorateKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “decorated” the garden with small lights and yellow flowers, because they are my grandmother’s favourite. We also hireKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “hired” a small band that played songs from her young days, and everybody danced, even the children. When she arrived, she was very surpriseKesilapan bentuk: sepatutnya “was very surprised” and she started to cry. I was really happyFrasa asas; menghadkan Lexical Resource to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow with old photos of her, and my uncle makeKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “made” a speech about her life. It was a very nice speechKosa kata asas; “heartfelt speech” lebih tepat and many people were crying. The party impressed me so much because my family worked hard for it, you knowKata pengisi yang digunakan sebagai penanda teragak-agak, and everybody came from different cities only to say thank you to her. I never seeKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “had never seen” my family so united before. She told me later that it was the happiest day of her old age. I takeKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “took” many photos that night, and I still look at them when I want to feel happy. I think it was the best party in my life.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a birthday party that really impressed me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday. It was a surprise, so she had no idea about it. My cousins and I had been planning it for two months, and my aunt cooked enough food for a small army. About sixty people came: relatives, neighbours and a few friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt had decorated the garden with fairy lights and yellow flowers, which are my grandmother’s favourite, and we’d hired a small band that played songs from her youth, so everybody danced, even the children. When she walked in she was so surpriseKesilapan bentuk: sepatutnya “so surprised”, and she burst into tears. I was thrilledKata adjektif yang tepat dan jelas to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow of old photos, and my uncle gave a heartfelt speechKolokasi yang semula jadi about her life that left many people in tears. What impressed me most was how much effort everyone had put inCleft sentence menyusun penjelasan dengan jelas, because relatives travelled from other cities just to thank her. I’d never seen my family so much unitedKesilapan susunan perkataan: sepatutnya “so united” before. She told me afterwards that it was the happiest day she’d had in years. I took dozens of photos that night, and I still look at them when I want to feel cheerful. I think it was the best party I’ve ever gone toKesilapan kolokasi: sepatutnya “been to”.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a birthday party that really impressed me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday, and it was a surprise, so she had no idea. My cousins and I had been planning it for two months, and my aunt cooked enough food for a small army. About sixty people came: relatives, neighbours and a few friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt had decorated the garden with fairy lights and yellow flowers, which are my grandmother’s favourite, and we’d hired a small band that played songs from her youth, so everybody danced, even the children. When she walked in she was completely taken aback, and then she burst into tears. I was thrilled to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow of old photos, and my uncle gave a heartfelt speech about her life that left many people in tears. What impressed me most was how much effort everyone had put in, since relatives had travelled from other cities just to thank herCleft sentence serta klausa sebab past perfect, tepat sepanjang masa. I’d never seen my family pull togetherPhrasal verb idiomatik like that before. She told me afterwards that it was the happiest day she’d had in years, and I took dozens of photos that night that I still look at whenever I want cheering up. I think it was the best party I’ve ever been to, not because it was lavish, but because it was so sincerePertentangan seimbang menutup jawapan dengan semula jadi.