Describe a party for a special event that impressed you

Band 6

I would like to talk about a birthday party that really impressใช้รูปกริยาผิด ต้องเป็น “impressed” me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, and it was for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday. It was a surprise, so she did not know anything about it. My cousins and I planใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “planned” it for two months, and, erคำเติมที่ใช้หยุดคิด, my aunt cooked a lot of food. About sixty people came, and they were relatives, neighbours and some friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt decorateใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “decorated” the garden with small lights and yellow flowers, because they are my grandmother’s favourite. We also hireใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “hired” a small band that played songs from her young days, and everybody danced, even the children. When she arrived, she was very surpriseใช้รูปคำผิด ต้องเป็น “was very surprised” and she started to cry. I was really happyวลีพื้นฐาน จำกัดคะแนน Lexical Resource to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow with old photos of her, and my uncle makeใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “made” a speech about her life. It was a very nice speechใช้คำพื้นฐาน “heartfelt speech” แม่นยำกว่า and many people were crying. The party impressed me so much because my family worked hard for it, you knowใช้คำเติมเป็นตัวหยุดคิด, and everybody came from different cities only to say thank you to her. I never seeใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “had never seen” my family so united before. She told me later that it was the happiest day of her old age. I takeใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “took” many photos that night, and I still look at them when I want to feel happy. I think it was the best party in my life.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a birthday party that really impressed me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday. It was a surprise, so she had no idea about it. My cousins and I had been planning it for two months, and my aunt cooked enough food for a small army. About sixty people came: relatives, neighbours and a few friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt had decorated the garden with fairy lights and yellow flowers, which are my grandmother’s favourite, and we’d hired a small band that played songs from her youth, so everybody danced, even the children. When she walked in she was so surpriseใช้รูปคำผิด ต้องเป็น “so surprised”, and she burst into tears. I was thrilledคำคุณศัพท์ที่แม่นยำและเห็นภาพ to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow of old photos, and my uncle gave a heartfelt speechcollocation ที่เป็นธรรมชาติ about her life that left many people in tears. What impressed me most was how much effort everyone had put incleft sentence ช่วยจัดคำอธิบายให้ชัดเจน, because relatives travelled from other cities just to thank her. I’d never seen my family so much unitedลำดับคำผิด ต้องเป็น “so united” before. She told me afterwards that it was the happiest day she’d had in years. I took dozens of photos that night, and I still look at them when I want to feel cheerful. I think it was the best party I’ve ever gone toใช้ collocation ผิด ต้องเป็น “been to”.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a birthday party that really impressed me. It was held last August in the garden of my aunt’s house in Medellin, for my grandmother’s eightieth birthday, and it was a surprise, so she had no idea. My cousins and I had been planning it for two months, and my aunt cooked enough food for a small army. About sixty people came: relatives, neighbours and a few friends from my grandmother’s church. My aunt had decorated the garden with fairy lights and yellow flowers, which are my grandmother’s favourite, and we’d hired a small band that played songs from her youth, so everybody danced, even the children. When she walked in she was completely taken aback, and then she burst into tears. I was thrilled to see her face. After dinner we showed a slideshow of old photos, and my uncle gave a heartfelt speech about her life that left many people in tears. What impressed me most was how much effort everyone had put in, since relatives had travelled from other cities just to thank hercleft sentence พร้อมประโยคเหตุผลแบบ past perfect ถูกต้องตลอดประโยค. I’d never seen my family pull togetherphrasal verb แบบสำนวน like that before. She told me afterwards that it was the happiest day she’d had in years, and I took dozens of photos that night that I still look at whenever I want cheering up. I think it was the best party I’ve ever been to, not because it was lavish, but because it was so sincereการเปรียบต่างที่สมดุลปิดท้ายคำตอบได้เป็นธรรมชาติ.