Describe a happy person you know

Band 6

I would like to talk about my aunt Amina, who is the younger sister of my mother. She lives in Mombasa in Kenya, and she has a small tailoring shop near the old town. She opened it fifteen years ago and now three women works주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “work” there with her. She is very happy person관사 누락: 올바른 형태는 “a very happy person”, I think, and everybody who know주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “knows” her says the same. She is warm and talkative, and she is also very generous. She laugh주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “laughs” loudly, and the laugh is so big that people in the street turn their heads, you know머뭇거림 표지로 쓰인 군말. While she is sewing, she sings old songs, and sometimes my cousins is dancing주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “are dancing” around the shop with her. She greets every customer by name and she often bring주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “brings” snacks for the neighbours. If somebody has a problem she always stops her work to listen, and she never says that she is too busy. I think she is happy because she is content with what she has. She does not compare herself with other people, er자연스러운 머뭇거림 표지, 가벼운 군말, and she spends time with her family every day. She also says thank you for small things, like a good meal or good weather기본적인 어휘, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함. Even on difficult days she tells jokes, and the customers go home smiling. The neighbours say that the street feels quiet when she travels. When I am with her I feeled동사 형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “feel” relaxed and I forget my worries. She is a very good기본적인 형용사, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 example of a happy person.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my aunt Amina, my mother’s younger sister. She lives in Mombasa, in Kenya, and she runs a small tailoring shop near the old town. She opened it fifteen years ago, and now three women work there with her. She’s one of the most cheerful people I know관계절이 붙은 최상급을 자연스럽게 사용, and everybody who meets her says the same. She’s warm, talkative and very generous. She has a big laugh, and it’s so loud that people in the street turn their heads. While she’s sewing she sings old songs, and sometimes my cousins dances주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “dance” around the shop with her. She greets every customer by name and often brings snacks for the neighbours. If someone has a problem she’ll stop whatever she’s doing to listen, and she never says she’s too busy. I think she’s happy because she’s content with what she has명사절 “what”을 정확하게 사용. She doesn’t compare herself with other people, and she spends time with her family every day. She also counts her blessings관용 표현을 자연스럽게 사용, thanking people for small things such as a good meal or a cool breeze from the sea. Even on difficult days she tells jokes, and customers leave the shop smiling. The neighbours say that the street feels quiet when she travels. When I’m with her I feel relaxed and I forget my worries, which I think says a lot개인적인 의견을 덧붙이는 연결 표현. She really is a living example of what a positive outlook can do.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my aunt Amina, my mother’s younger sister. She lives in Mombasa, in Kenya, and she runs a small tailoring shop near the old town. She opened it fifteen years ago, and three women now work alongside her. She’s one of the most cheerful people I know관계절이 붙은 최상급을 자연스럽게 사용, and everybody who meets her says the same. She’s warm, talkative and exceptionally generous. Her laugh is so loud that people in the street turn their heads, and while she’s sewing she sings old songs, so my cousins often end up dancing around the shop with her“end up” 뒤의 분사구를 자연스럽게 사용. She greets every customer by name and regularly brings snacks round for the neighbours. If someone is struggling she’ll put down her scissors to listen, and she has never once said she was too busy. As for why she’s happy, I think it comes down to the fact that she’s content with what she has. She never compares herself with other people, she spends time with her family every day, and she counts her blessings관용 표현을 자연스럽게 사용, thanking people for small things such as a good meal or a cool breeze from the sea. Even on difficult days she cracks jokes, and customers leave the shop smiling. The neighbours say that the street feels quiet when she travels. Honestly,개인적인 성찰을 이끄는 담화 표지 when I’m with her I feel relaxed and my worries seem to melt away관용적인 구동사를 자연스럽게 사용. She is living proof of how much a positive outlook can change an ordinary day복잡한 보어가 붙은 추상 명사구.